sunnyha
Write a letter to your friend.tell him/her about your childhood
Dear Anna!!!
As a child, I lived in a province called Ha Tay.Now it had became Ha Noi capitall city.
When I was 3 my parents often took me for my grandmother because they had to work all day.House's my grandmom where I used to play " hide and seek" with some cousins.we always played together
There was a river near my grandmom house.we usually swimed there.my granddad taugh us swim.I enjoy swimming and laying games underwater with my cousins.we often eat and sleep together
When I was six my mother took me to school and I had have first lessons.My teacher was very intelligent and gentle but I feel afraided when she angry.
When I finished 12 grade.I have moved in HCM city and continue on study college.every year I come back home one time.First year I went back to visit my home.Everything seem became strange to me.There was only one thing: Love of my parents for me still the same
Now I have to stop writing.I will tell to you more when I meet you again
Your close friend
SUNNY
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Dark Baron
Phổ thôngDear Anna!!!
As a child, I lived in a province called Ha Tay.Now it had became Ha Noi capitall city.
I live in Hatay province (nghe ngắn gọn hơn) - Now it is has been merged into Hanoi city.
When I was 3 my parents often took me for my grandmother because they had to work all day.
Three years old (những số lớn hơn 10 mới nên viết bằng con số), took me to my grandmother('s).
House's my grandmom where I used to play " hide and seek" with some cousins.
I used to play hide-and-seek in my grandma's house with some of my cousins.
we always played together
There was a river near my grandmom house.
grandma's house/ grandmother's house (ko có từ grandmom).
we usually swimed there.
swimmed (kết thúc bằng phụ âm-nguyên âm-phụ âm thì gấp đôi phụ âm cuối - quy tắc pnp)
my granddad taugh us swim.
my grandaddy/ grandfather taught us to/ how to swim.
I enjoy swimming and laying games underwater with my cousins.
I enjoyED swimming and playing games underwater with my cousins.
we often eat and sleep together => ate and slept
When I was six my mother took me to school and I had have first lessons.
and i got my first lessons.
My teacher was very intelligent and gentle but I feel afraided when she angry.
but i felt afraid when she got/ was angry.
When I finished 12 grade.I have moved in HCM city and continue on study college.
the 12th grade/ the grade 12, (dùng dấu phẩy) I have moved TO HCMC and continued my college.
every year I come back home one time. First year I went back to visit my home.
on my first year,
Everything seem became strange to me.
Everything seemed strange to me.
There was only one thing: Love of my parents for me still the same
However. the love that my parents give me is still / remains unchanged.
Now I have to stop writing. I will tell to you more when I meet you again
tell you more (tell + ai đó)
Your close friend,