Birthday

ngo thy mai - 26/09/2012 22:03

Today is my birthday. It rained so heavily but i still went out. I took a photograph, had dinner, drank coffee and blowed out candle alone. I fell very sad, so i want to alone. Now is 10 PM, it rain too heavy to me hear headphone. I suppose that it can flood tomorrow. Oh! I hate flood. It's very terrible! I hope that it stop rain as soon as possible.

khanhnguyen - 26/09/2012 23:01

happy birthday! i think everything will be ok tomorrow. it will be a nice day tomorrow and you will enjoy the day happily with your friend. have a sweet dream!

Con Cá Mập - 27/09/2012 01:20

happy birthday!!! don't worry,be happy,everything will be OK :))
I promise,cross my heart

Masterpiece of fighting - 27/09/2012 09:39

hi thy mai,

1. I want to be alone

2. it is raining too heavy for me to listen ... through the headphone

3. The word flood, I seldom see it is used as a verbwith literal meaning - " lu lut ". It is often used as a noun with this meaning. However, it can be used as a verb for non-literal meaning " tran ngap, ua toi tap". I think you can say " I suppose flood is nearly coming tomorrow."

4. I hope that it stopS RAINING.

That is my point of view to make your writing become more perfect. Hope to get contributing comments from everyone!

Good day.

Lê Trường Khanh - 27/09/2012 10:22

I agree with serena anna, hihi!!! just be a comment. "today" you should use simple present!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!

ngo thy mai - 27/09/2012 20:59

Thanks so much!

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