My hometown-Yen Bai province
I'm so sorry for many mistakes I had in the first writing. But I'm so happy too. Because there was a lots of people commented about my writing. Even someone corrected the mistake. Thank for that.
As I promised in this previous writing, Today I'll share with you about my hometown. I was born in a small province in the northern of Viet Nam. Exactly, northwest. It's called Yen Bai Province. If you ask me that what is famous in your hometown? I only show you 2 things. The first thing is Thac Ba hydroelectric plant. This is the first hydroelectric plant in Viet Nam. Because of hydroelectric plant we have the largest handmade lake in Viet Nam. The landscape is so beautiful. All seem to be original. You can rent a canoe to make a journey on the lake. The hills look like as bowl bottom up with many trees. The same green with the sky and water make you feel excited. The air is fresh. It's so interesting when you have a fishing rod to catch fish. And the second thing is Mu Cang Chai. This is town very far with city center. When someone wants to talk about place very far, poor, remote they'll say about Mu Cang Chai. Although they don't know where is Mu Cang Chai. The northern people usually say that. Most of people think that, there are only ethnic minorities living there, the main transportation is horse or something like that. But Yen Bai city is located in the center of province. We have some buildings,, supermarkets, and city life is normal with us. Although the living standard is not as good as city one, some of us have good living condition.
When I was a child, I don't self-confident if someone ask me about my hometown which is poor and undeveloped. It's so difficult for me to enter university. Nowadays, people can have good quality living. Everything will be change. We hope the good thing can come with my hometown
@: Please tell me if I have mistake. Love to all
Vũ Thị Kim Xuyến
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you have good idea to write this passage, however i see your sentences that aren't connected with your writing. and the sentences as If you ask me that what is famous.....i think you use English like the way you speak Vietnamese. , the first thing you can .replace by " first of all " to avoid repeating the word " thing " ." Because of hydroelectric plant we have the largest handmade lake in Viet Nam " actually i dont understand what your mean.and self-confident it is adj not verb you lack of to be