Problem of lives
Do you prefer living in the city or living in the village? What is going on to our lives?
Nowadays, economyis improving a lot. You can have many means of communications everywhere. Life is more comfortable. More and more services are occurring. Let's consider the real advantage and disadvantage of the life in the city and in the village and the problems we are facing.
It is difficult to negate the advantage of the life in the city. Life is so convenient and useful. We now have modern electrical equipment such as refrigerator, airconditionor, washing machine, television and so on. They gives us the better life. There are also many means of communications to have a civilized life as well as widen our knowledge such as World Wide Web... For example, if you want to have some information for your research immediately, you can find on web fast. However, life in the city have some problems we need to solve and the environment is one of them. Maybe you have heard about the acid rain and the rottenness of ozone layers. Our life is under the threat of the environment. Human now finds it difficult to stop the deforestation. Many woods are cutting down. The rate of the rain forest is shortened so fast.
Life in the village seems to be opposite. Life is not so convenient. There are just a few electric equipments. But it is so great to go sightseeing in the village. The range of beautiful mountain, the green large field... Everything is as beautiful as a picture. The environment is cleaner and there are more trees. It is too good to believe but maybe life in the village can lengthen our life. There is not too much dust of vehicles as well as factories, suitable to live when you are an elderly people.
Although we live in the city or in the village, we have to face the problem: our environment is getting worse, just fewer or not. Ther are more and more solutions such as Planting The Tree, Earth Time, Recycling Festival.... but it can not solve our problems absolutely. The first important thing is you have to recognize what we are facing and then find out the solutions. We can not reborn the extinct animals as well as to mend the hole of ozone layer. How life in the future can you imagine? The life with green environment or we have to communicate to others with gas-masks? The choices depend on you!
It is difficult to negate the advantage of the life in the city. Life is so convenient and useful. We now have modern electrical equipment such as refrigerator, airconditionor, washing machine, television and so on. They gives us the better life. There are also many means of communications to have a civilized life as well as widen our knowledge such as World Wide Web... For example, if you want to have some information for your research immediately, you can find on web fast. However, life in the city have some problems we need to solve and the environment is one of them. Maybe you have heard about the acid rain and the rottenness of ozone layers. Our life is under the threat of the environment. Human now finds it difficult to stop the deforestation. Many woods are cutting down. The rate of the rain forest is shortened so fast.
Life in the village seems to be opposite. Life is not so convenient. There are just a few electric equipments. But it is so great to go sightseeing in the village. The range of beautiful mountain, the green large field... Everything is as beautiful as a picture. The environment is cleaner and there are more trees. It is too good to believe but maybe life in the village can lengthen our life. There is not too much dust of vehicles as well as factories, suitable to live when you are an elderly people.
Although we live in the city or in the village, we have to face the problem: our environment is getting worse, just fewer or not. Ther are more and more solutions such as Planting The Tree, Earth Time, Recycling Festival.... but it can not solve our problems absolutely. The first important thing is you have to recognize what we are facing and then find out the solutions. We can not reborn the extinct animals as well as to mend the hole of ozone layer. How life in the future can you imagine? The life with green environment or we have to communicate to others with gas-masks? The choices depend on you!

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Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Lan
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Masterpiece of fighting
Phổ thôngYour essay is very good. Keep doing but I still want to make it perfect. I always try towards perfection. If you agree I'm going for it now:d
- Nowadays, economy is improving a lot. We use economy - a noun instead of economic - an adj. But in my point of view, I will use this structure Today's economy is improving a lot. Because economy stands alone makes it a kind of weird. But it's ok.:d
- The rate of the rain forest is shortened so fast (passive voice)
- smoke of vehicles not dust of vehicles
Only three mistakes I think you made. But that is very good of you. Keep going!
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