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ngo thy mai - 26/09/2012 22:03
khanhnguyen - 26/09/2012 23:01
happy birthday! i think everything will be ok tomorrow. it will be a nice day tomorrow and you will enjoy the day happily with your friend. have a sweet dream!
Con Cá Mập - 27/09/2012 01:20
happy birthday!!! don't worry,be happy,everything will be OK :))
I promise,cross my heart
Masterpiece of fighting - 27/09/2012 09:39
hi thy mai,
1. I want to be alone
2. it is raining too heavy for me to listen ... through the headphone
3. The word flood, I seldom see it is used as a verbwith literal meaning - " lu lut ". It is often used as a noun with this meaning. However, it can be used as a verb for non-literal meaning " tran ngap, ua toi tap". I think you can say " I suppose flood is nearly coming tomorrow."
4. I hope that it stopS RAINING.
That is my point of view to make your writing become more perfect. Hope to get contributing comments from everyone!
Lê Trường Khanh - 27/09/2012 10:22
I agree with serena anna, hihi!!! just be a comment. "today" you should use simple present!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
ngo thy mai - 27/09/2012 20:59
Thanks so much!
Đặng Thị Bảo Nhi - 25/09/2012 22:15
a terrible experience
Hoàng Thị Hoa - 25/09/2012 23:11
a wonderful experience.
Đặng Thị Bảo Nhi - 25/09/2012 23:31
i think it's terrible experience, not a wonderful one
Masterpiece of fighting - 26/09/2012 09:07
Hi Bao Nhi,
What do you mean when you wrote " to make it worse,..."? Did you mean that worse than that, we got lost because we didnt ( not don't) know they way.
Go in front of me, I think the phrase in front of it gives the meaning of immoblie things. For example, I open the box in front of you. so in this case, I prefer to use " he went after me" in stead of " I went in fron of him".
Anyway, your writing is very good. I like it. And it was such a unforgottable experience you got!.
Đặng Thị Bảo Nhi - 26/09/2012 16:48
thank you so much for your advice.
To make it worse,.....
It mean we not only had a traffic jam but also didn't know the way.
It made everything too worse
Khoa Vu - 25/09/2012 15:55
I want to improve writing English skill so please help me to check it. I want to talk something with my best friend.
Masterpiece of fighting - 25/09/2012 16:46
I'm pleased to correct your mistakes as follow:
1. She is working as* an accoutant
2. Almost people in* her company ( why dont use choose almost her colleagues like her. its ok :D)
3. I dont understand what this statement means. does charity for DEAD at cemetaries. Maybe I dont know what this event does.
4. I am worried about her. When you say " to worry someone" means to make someone worry.
5. It will affect her love. affect is verb, effect is noun. affect someone/something, no preposition followed.
6. With all She did, I hope there will be a good man coming to her/loving her. Fall in love with someone means you have special feeling with someone. But here I guess you meant A good man will come to her because She is a good one, right?
7. I want to send my apology to her.
8. I want to invite her to* go out and drink coffee/ invite her for a drink is more concise!
Good luck and keep going.
Khoa Vu - 26/09/2012 09:49
Thank you for your reply :)
Have a lot of mistakes, I need to write more :)
3. Do charity for DEAD mean that: Her company will organize a prayer for the dead in the cemetaries and the old prisons that had a lot of graves of compatants. They pitch a lot of tents with flags, flowers and fruits. There are a lot of monks that will pray for the dead. Is it clearly?
4. I am worried about her mean that I make her worry. May I use: I am worring for her, right?
6. You right, I hope there is a good man will love her and she love him.
Masterpiece of fighting - 26/09/2012 10:07
3. ok I understand. I have never seen it before.
4. I am worried about her mean she make you worried. Worry is a verb mean something/someone makes you worried. For example, She worries me = I'm worried about her. But she worries me has a kind of negative meaning. She is doing something unhappied making you worried. To sum up, you should you " I'm worried ABOUT her".
Khoa Vu - 26/09/2012 10:56
I see. Thanks a lot
letieuphuong - 25/09/2012 11:54
I must hand my lesson for teacher on February. Please correct my lesson about grammar, organize idea , context . Thanks you a lot !
Masterpiece of fighting - 25/09/2012 16:11
It's my pleasure to correct mistakes from your writing:d
1. I must hand in my lesson (or hand my lession in) to my teacher in* February.
2. when students have free time.
3. run out of money
4. as well as stressed (stressed is adj, stress is noun)
5. after a hard-studying week
6. they can go home to be* encouraged in spirit by their family
7. cost is suitable for families in low financial condition.
8. These student don't have enough money to participate in ...
9. in stead of stopping for the reason of high school-fee
10. Finally, the qualily of learning is good in a small college because of fewer students.
11. Therefore, professor can easily communicate lessons to their students and take in all students' studying situation.
Your writing is quite good. But it's still like you translate words by words from Vietnamese into English. To be good in writing, you should do more reading besides learning writing tips from writing skill books. Because when you read English books, you will see how they write. that's not what exactly translated into Vietnamese words. Hope you try more. So do I.:D
letieuphuong - 26/09/2012 13:39
D: Serena anna Thank you so much hjhj
thuynguyen - 23/09/2012 21:30
a friend of mine is going away
Kẹo đắng - 24/09/2012 00:32
For sure , your friend will be right back . I also went study abroad, and came back after the studying course finished. Just keep him/her in your mind , keep contact via mobile, or facebook ^ ^,it seems there is not a distance between you.
Friendship is as important as family. I am happy for you to have such a good friend.
Good luck for you both.
Masterpiece of fighting - 24/09/2012 13:53
There are mistakes from your writing:
1. when he comes back or will come back
2. in Japan not Nhat Ban.lol
Vo Thai Hung - 24/09/2012 15:14
the most important
go away = die. I think, You dont't use it.
Masterpiece of fighting - 24/09/2012 16:11
@Hung: yes, I didn't notice those mistakes.
letieuphuong - 25/09/2012 12:24
le ngoc tram anh - 23/09/2012 19:40
today is a bad day for me .in the morning , i have a worry thing and i angry with my father ,so i very regret .must i make any thing for my dad ? please tell an answer .i hope you will help me
Trần Hoàng Hiếu - 23/09/2012 20:29
Hello Tram Anh!
My name's Hieu. I'm glad to make friend with you.Both I and you are trying to learing English. So, if we are friend together, we can chat in English everyday to improve our Enlish skills. OK!
At the momment, I know your feel clearly! I have ever had same some situations like you now. And in those situation, I am very sad and I don't know what to do then. I regret and I want to say " Sorry", but I can't. I think you are so. Is it right? But you know, when you say "Sorry my Dad! It was my fault! And I regret! I love you!", your Dad will be very happy. Then, you will feel great and comfortable! Do you see? I think you should follow my advice!
I online on this web not often, so, if you want to make friend with me, you can cantact me by mail firstname.lastname@example.org, or Yahoo Messenger! : hotboy_thoidaimoi95, Facebook Hiếu Trần Hoàng ( avatar Ngầu chưa). But I think you should contact me on gmail, because it is the most simple to contact me! Okl!
See you again!
quang7a2 - 23/09/2012 21:10
e ket ban voi to ko
Masterpiece of fighting - 23/09/2012 21:13
Hi tram anh and Hieu, my purpose of staying here is to study english, but I'm lazy to think of things for writing. So reading and correcting mistakes from writings of others is my way. I hope both of you and others from this site as well understand what I am doing here.
1. worrying thing not worry thing, we need an adjective preceded. But there are two adjectives originate from the verb worry are worried and worrying. But -ed gives you a passive meaning, while -ing causes in the result. Here it's a thing makes you worried, that's the adj worrying (-ing) should be used here.
2. Should I "do" any thing for my dad? make is a verb might not used in this case.
@ Hieu: your writing is good but I want to make it become better. I love perfectivity and try towards it.
1. Both you and I. In English, Speakers respect listeners by naming others before themselves.
2. I know your feeling. feel is a verb
3. some same situations, some + adj + noun. that is the right oder between them.
4. those situationS.
5. I think you are like me, you are the same or so are you. Not you are so.
6. I come online
Hope both of you like what I have just done.
Khoa Vu - 25/09/2012 11:29
I think your dad does not take it to heart but you could kiss on his cheek and whisper on his ear: "I'm sorry, I love you so much".
letieuphuong - 25/09/2012 12:29
@ Serena anna. please correct my lesson in writing lesson. Thanks you very much
Vu Le Son - 18/09/2012 22:37
Do you prefer living in the city or living in the village? What is going on to our lives?
Masterpiece of fighting - 19/09/2012 09:08
Your essay is very good. Keep doing but I still want to make it perfect. I always try towards perfection. If you agree I'm going for it now:d
- Nowadays, economy is improving a lot. We use economy - a noun instead of economic - an adj. But in my point of view, I will use this structure Today's economy is improving a lot. Because economy stands alone makes it a kind of weird. But it's ok.:d
- The rate of the rain forest is shortened so fast (passive voice)
- smoke of vehicles not dust of vehicles
Only three mistakes I think you made. But that is very good of you. Keep going!
Hope you like this.
letieuphuong - 19/09/2012 10:09
good essay. Evironment is getting worse. we have to protect it. If environment is bad , it will affect to your health and life .
Nguyễn Thị Ngọc Lan - 19/09/2012 14:04
Hi Vu Le Son, after reading your essay and Serena anna's comments, i think i must try more and more to keep up with many members of Hellochao.
Vu Le Son - 19/09/2012 18:30
tieututhikdua - 19/09/2012 20:39
thank you about your post.
dragon - 19/09/2012 21:20
very good! a problem is not new but U expressed very well. i like it.
mai thị thêu - 20/09/2012 20:41
i like your writing and agree with your oppinion. this topic i have ever discussed so much time in my studying. and i think you have good ideas, let's try to develop it.
Lê Trường Khanh - 21/09/2012 15:47
Hi!!! I think you really good! But you should use " Prefer doing s.th to doing s.th" hihi!!!! how do you do!!!
trang nguyen - 17/09/2012 11:16
This is my first writing so let's me introduce st about myself. I hope all of you'll concern about it. Thank for that
chiến phong aragon - 17/09/2012 12:31
nice, congratulation to interesting girl ! i am looking forward to your next writing :D
BEBUSITIN - 17/09/2012 13:50
Your sharing is funny, You're a lucky person.
mai thị thêu - 17/09/2012 14:17
you are right. as we know that everything can happen and it mainly depends on ourselves. so, we let try our best and we have the right to be proud of our country, poor or rich is not important. the most important here is that how we think about it
Tran Duy Khanh - 17/09/2012 14:22
i want make friend with you.
Trần Thị Như Ái - 17/09/2012 14:22
nice to be your friend and look forward to hear your story, i love the Central people. they are the one who can overcome any difficulties and win at last. wish best things to you
Masterpiece of fighting - 17/09/2012 16:24
@trang nguyen: I would like to correct some of your mistakes. If you dont mind I will go for it:)
- let me introduce not let's me
- new words
- at first or firstly, not the first
- personal infomation/private information, not individual information. individual la ca nhan, khi ban so sanh voi tap the nhe.
- Firstly, let me introduce about my personval/private information
- Is it too late to study english?
- it takes 180km
- cai cau get out of range of village bamboo la sao vay ban, minh chua hieu?
-But there is a decision to change my life. That is in the second section." minh chua hieu y nay cua ban.
-respectively,secondly not the second
- major of ....
- Eventually / finally not at last, at last khi nao ban dung cho 1 trat tu liet ke, con y cua ban la cuoi cung, rot cuoc...
- became not becomed
- I wrote a lot to talk about ... or I have a lot of writing to talk... ban dung use a lot of writing nghe hoi ky ky
- the third van khong duoc, thu nhat la phai dung thirdly, thu hai la day la liet ke cuoi cung ban nen dung at last nhe.
=== I hope you will like what I have just done.
Khắc Phục - 17/09/2012 18:55
Thanks for correcting Trang Nguyen!
ngo thy mai - 17/09/2012 22:04
Nice to meet you!
Your introduction very good. I like it! Congratulation
trang nguyen - 18/09/2012 13:49
@serena: thank for your correction. This is reason I want to write more.
Get out of range of bamboo : thoát khỏi, đi ra khỏi lũy tre làng.
I'll try to become better, wait for it. Love to all
Masterpiece of fighting - 18/09/2012 14:23
@trang nguyen? good for you if you try your best, but range la day, loai... neu ra khoi luy tre lang thi ban chi can noi la get out of my bamboo village.the word range is not appropriate to this case.
Hope you will get better.
The more you practice, the more fluent you are.
letieuphuong - 19/09/2012 11:03
I want to correct your mistakes
I couldnt pass not cant pass
Business and Management major
Ha Noi National University
My parent was so happy
intelligent or smart
use a lot of writing skills to write.
thao - 16/09/2012 13:34
Sunday, 16th, 2012
Masterpiece of fighting - 16/09/2012 13:47
ban oi minh co vai cho muon sua cho ban, neu ban khong co van de gi thi doc vai loi minh gop y nhe:)
- I have a thinking ban nen noi la I think
- much money not many money
-discomfort la verb, nen ban dung adj la discomfortable
-frustrating la adj gay ra hanh dong, con you feel la ban bi tac dong nen dung frustrated
-I have argue mommy, y ban la sao minh chua hieu, cau nay chua ro nghia.
-as soon as the time i argue mommy cung the, minh chua hieu
-have a feel crime? co fai y ban la thay loi loi khong? thi nen dung la i always feel guitly or i always have guilty feelings
-forgive me not let forgive me, let someone do something la cho ai lam dieu gi do, con neu yeu cau thi chi van noi khong co chu ngu
-Im a high-tempered person, not im a temper.
Hy vong giup duoc phan nao cho ban.
thao - 16/09/2012 13:58
It is sure, Thank for your help!
thao - 16/09/2012 14:01
I have argued mommy( me to y) hi
thao - 16/09/2012 14:01
Tuc la to tranh cai voi me to!
thao - 16/09/2012 14:02
"as soon as...." ngay sau khi con tranh cai voi me
thao - 16/09/2012 14:06
I won't forget your comment!
Masterpiece of fighting - 16/09/2012 14:19
- So I have to argue with my mommy
-as soon as I argue with .. duoc roi, khong can the time dau, ma voi lai chu y gioi tu di kem voi no, la argue WITH nhe
Chuc ban hoc gioi.
aroma taicher - 16/09/2012 16:34
I Always Argue With My Mother Although I don't Want
I love my mother and I never want to hurt her. On the contrary my thought, I always argue with her right after few sentences of our conversations. When our arguements are over, I feel guilty and I want to appoloze her and I wish to have her fogiveness, but it is very hard to talk to her about how I feel and what I wish.
Mother, I know I am a high-tempred boy, please give me time to perfect myself day by day, I promise that some day I will become a good boy. I love you so much, my mother.
thao - 16/09/2012 20:12
Yes, I will become good with your support!
truong thi mong cam - 16/09/2012 20:58
hello ,when you want to talk sorry to your mother .i think you really regret and you very love your mother,sometime i also agrue with my parents,after that i figure out my wrong thing and i say sorry to my parent,my parent forgiven for me and they felt happy when i know wrong and responsible for that thing
Masterpiece of fighting - 16/09/2012 21:15
@ aroma: You should say On the contrary, ... or contrary to my thought,...
-phrase give me time is not wrong, but you recommend you to use phrase please let me take time to perfect ...that would be better in my point of view.
aroma taicher - 16/09/2012 23:14
- to TTMC: @ aroma: You should say On the contrary, ... or contrary to my thought,...: THANKS<. YOU ARE RIGHT
- -phrase give me time is not wrong, but you recommend you to use phrase please let me take time to perfect ...that would be better in my point of view.----> WHAT DO YOU MEAN?
aroma taicher - 16/09/2012 23:17
@thao: Yes, I will become good with your support!-----> Yes, I will become a good guy as I promised
thanh - 19/09/2012 01:16
you are a bad girl, you are very bad...do you know why you did appear in this earth, do you know who have been taking care you, do you know how hard they got to protect you until now, you think money can make you life happyness,or a good member in a family....a word to make others happy shouldn't be keep in your mouth or your mind
"bad girl...bad bad bad..."
thao - 19/09/2012 21:33
Yes, Im bad, very bad. I know,.I'm sorry for all my actions
Nguyễn Minh Tuân - 16/09/2012 13:07
Masterpiece of fighting - 16/09/2012 14:01
minh khong nho diem ngu phap nao, nhung sau tobe la verb thi phai la to infinitive
vi du:- what i want to do now is to study hard.
- my purpose is to get high score in the final exam.
aroma taicher - 16/09/2012 15:46
my advice = subject
is = verb
to see a doctor = object
subject + verb + object = a complete sentence
Masterpiece of fighting - 16/09/2012 21:09
cau tra loi cua ban aroma hoi hue von, vi noi nhu ban cau nao chang co toi thieu 3 thanh phan do, nhung quan trong, sao tobe neu la verb thi fai la to-inf. than ai
thao - 15/09/2012 20:45
saturday, 15th, 2012
Masterpiece of fighting - 16/09/2012 13:28
-an english club
-you overcome your shyness not practice your shyness.
Sorry I just wanted to correct your mistakes.
thao - 16/09/2012 13:37
oh no, i thank for your comment a lot, I wil revise and I'm very happy for all helpness from all people! Let follow and help me modify my mistake!
Masterpiece of fighting - 16/09/2012 14:22
help la noun roi khong can helpness nhe ban
-cung nhu minh comment ban o phan truoc thi let someone do something la cho ai lam gi do, let's do something la chung ta hay lam gi do, o day ban muon noi nhung nguoi khac, nghia la 1 cau sai khien (cau co ten goi sai khien nhung y nghia khong han sai khien theo nghia vietnamese dau nhe) thi ban chi can bo chu ngu la ok.
thao - 16/09/2012 20:21
Yes I'm very happy for all help, Follow and help me modify my misktake! am I right now?
Masterpiece of fighting - 16/09/2012 21:10
It's ok, thao. keep trying!