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Lương Nguyễn Kiến Tường - 02/04/2012 22:52
Mình vừa hoàn thành xong bài viết này, mấy bạn vào xem góp ý dùm mình. Mình rất biết ơn.
Bui Luong Dung - 02/04/2012 23:15
mình thấy có 2 từ bạn viết sai chính tả một chút:)
môn vật lý: physics
kế thừa, thừa hưởng: inherit
Lương Nguyễn Kiến Tường - 02/04/2012 23:22
ok, mình sửa rồi. Cảm ơn bạn nhiều. Hihi
Phượng Rô - 02/04/2012 23:23
Lương Nguyễn Kiến Tường - 02/04/2012 23:25
sao cười vậy nguyen phuong. What wrong.
Phượng Rô - 02/04/2012 23:34
câu chuyện của bạn về bố mình hay mà ...........
Lương Nguyễn Kiến Tường - 02/04/2012 23:49
mà sao... @@. Bạn làm mình rung quá. Có gì ko ổn à.
Nguyễn Tùng Anh - 03/04/2012 00:09
I enjoyed your article but I think you should create the highlights of your story !
qwerty20590 - 03/04/2012 00:20
you are so lucky!
Bui Linh - 03/04/2012 09:23
I love my family verry much !!
Dang Quang Hai - 03/04/2012 10:43
Mình xin góp ý . Ba của bạn rất tuyệt vời. Công việc chăm sóc con cái là một công việc liên tục trong một thời gian rất dài, mình nghĩ bạn nên nhấn mạnh vào điều đó vì thế bạn nên viết He has been.
Lương Nguyễn Kiến Tường - 03/04/2012 20:09
Hihi, xin cảm ơn các bạn rất nhiều.
miu truong - 03/04/2012 20:31
konochiwa!! Luong Nguyen Kien Tuong
your writing is quite good. ^^......Now, I understand why am I like your text. You know that you have an oily style...your writing the thread.
:)) last time, you said that you live in the countryside, I have a query! what your school's name you learning?? are you studing at a university in HCM city?
I felt happy when recived to messages from you again....
Lương Nguyễn Kiến Tường - 03/04/2012 21:09
Long time no see.
I am very happy when you continue to read my writting. I am from Tan An city and i am staying my home. Do u know TA city. I am having a holiday and tomorrow i will come back my school. How about u? Could u tell me some information about u. Where are u from? What is your school name? ,ect.
Waiting for your rely.
Troc cute! - 03/04/2012 21:38
i wish i had a father as you !
NGUYEN THI THU HANG - 04/04/2012 09:55
Hello Kien Tuong. You have a great fortune, that is your father. I'm unlucky. I wish my father just has some characteries of your father. I always have a bad impression when think about him. Am I not good daughter? But he always puts him as a unsocial man.
Nguyễn Thị Anh Thư - 04/04/2012 11:01
Hello Tường! Nice to meet you! I have recently read about your father! You have a great father, and me too!
When I read your writing, I miss my father so much! For me, My father is the best man in the world! He loves his wife and childrens by warm love.
He had taught me how to swim like the way which your father taught you. However, I'm "timid as a rabbit" and when my father pushed me far away from him, I'm very scare and I cried very loud ^^. Therefore, up to now, I haven't know how to swim! hic...>_<
Nguyễn Tùng Anh - 04/04/2012 12:33
Send Ms. Anh Thư @: I think you should learn the traditional way that's "dragonflies bite your belly button" ! :d :d
Đinh - 04/04/2012 18:50
My father dead when I was very young, even I could not remember his face. But my mother is really my idol. She was taking care of ne very good, even I'm adult now. She is always besides me, listen to what I want to share, teach me what I should do. I love her very much.
Thanks for sharing, Kien Tuong. I like your topic.
Nguyễn Thị Anh Thư - 04/04/2012 22:25
Đinh : You have a great mother! I believe if your father still lives, he will a great father too! Nice to meet you, Đinh! ^^
Tùng Anh: Hic! I'm a shy girl, I'd rather not know how to swim than to dragonflies bite my belly button ! hic >_<
cap_so_0 - 05/04/2012 09:52
thank you for your story
I have too that family
I love my family. good happy.
Lương Nguyễn Kiến Tường - 05/04/2012 09:59
Mr Dinh. I am sorry about your story. I think i am luckier than you but you still have your mother that is the best thing in your life. You and i should try to take care of our parents. Hihi, nice to meet you.
Nguyễn Thị Khuyên - 05/04/2012 14:43
i really like your story. you're so happy! i love myfather too. i think your father is perfect. my father didn't teach me swim or study but he taught me be man. he has been worked quite hard to raise me. And i khow that he love his family. my father is a large fortune. and so your father is! :)). ak. I have a query. what mean is word " tought"??? :))
binhmap - 06/04/2012 18:55
thanks for your topic
Đào Thùy Linh - 07/04/2012 10:23
Bạn viết bài hay quá
Phạm Thị Phương Thảo - 07/04/2012 20:22
Bài hát hay tặng bạn:
Đặng Thị Thanh Thúy - 07/04/2012 22:07
you are very lucky!
because you have a wonderful father.
so you must always respect that.
you make me feel to miss my family very much.
thank you very much.
nice to meet you!
ha thi binh - 21/05/2012 02:47
cau oi!cho two month phai la two months!but the writing of you is very good!you are very lucky!!1