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Very interesting!tks

i altogether agree with you. so i think we all know that is really important to us, but we have to do it with mental discipline.

I'm an example :D . sometimes i am really lazy with doing exerscise regularly. Maybe i don't have a time but that is sometimes :D...I almost skip doing exercise because of a game, a film, or any things with my wife( my Laptop :D) ... that is about doing exercise!

What about a healthy meal... that is very big problems with me :D . I can cook but not so well :D.  i always skip breakfast and sometimes lunch or diner :)). Somebody who can help me :( ??

And about positive attitudes. :D I'm not for sure ... maybe i am a positive man :) but sometimes i still get streessed out at my assignments .haiz. 

This is hot topic in recently. Especially with who are students, they usually go to bed late, get up late... That means they skip morning exercise, breakfast... Some of us abuse coffee for night studying, instant noodles...

I totally agree with u 2 "Health is the most important for us"

We are strong, we can do anything...

P/S: in recent time, I'm not in the best of health because of ........

I agree with you too. You can do anything with a good Health.

I'm a instance, now my health is not good. I usually use some medicines, especially in the winter I feel so bad with coldness. But I havent been changed my habit yet, I still skip morning exercise, go to bed at the midnight, sometimes skip lunch or dinner.... One of the reasons for this bad habit is my job so busy, however as for me, the main reason is I so lazy and dont appreciate my health. 

Sometimes, I so easy to make flu, or some simple illness. I hate myself so much when I cant do my job or help my family just only I havent got enough to strong. Hic.

See your topic, I recognize that take care of your health not only because of you but also others. Hope I will change my habit and revise my health like in the past. And all of you so. :D

Reduce stress ,yes,arrange time

My wife Iphone 

Of couse the meal is important nowaday, but many people, special is student who live far away home, can not cook, even have no money to have a good meal. they have to eat the noodle. that is a difficult problem to solve.

There are many reasons, they have negative effect on health.

so we should reduce bad habits, adjust our meals such that it is suitable for your life, and guarantee your health as well

Yours look like an IELTS essay, it is well-organized but the way you expressed you ideas made it different.  Sentences and phrases used in your essay are not really formal and less associative. Anyway, yours essay is pretty good.

 Morefuther => futhermore.

not only childrens but also adults => not only for children but also for adults (children chính là số nhiều của child đó bạn) 

A positive out look on life will help your to feel better and significantly reduce your stress level => A positive outlook on life (will) offer one a sense of relax and enjoy life better. (Trong essay minh nen han che dung You khi khong can thiet ban a, dac biet khi minh ban ve van de gi do chung chung nhu tren, ban nen thay bang nguoi ta, chung ta....) Hi, co giao minh bao vay do :)

Why can you write this essay? Still have some mistakes, but mainly is very good.

Thanks!

 Health is the most valuable possession of one's life .

Love , An hot topic  is endlessly deabated.. joke

văn bạn viết thấy khá giống mình...chắc cùng sư đồ, nhưng bài viết còn kém lắm bạn àh

sai nhiều chỗ quá...cấu trúc lại không hay nửa...làm biếng sửa online .....tui ở cần thơ, đường mậu thân.....nếu gần đây thì gặp tui sửa dùm cho..pipi

theo tôi (chủ quan nha) bài này được 1,5 điểm

chúc bạn thành công

Reference essay:

Many students choose to share accommodation with other students when they are in school because there are many advantages for living together with roommates. However, if you choose your roommates inappropriately, you may get yourselves into a trouble and jeopardize your life and study. So what are some of these important qualities of a good roommate? Given different personalities and preferences, many people have different opinions. I will choose a good roommate based on several qualities.

For the first important quality, a roommate should be a friendly person. As we know, nobody likes to live with a person who is difficult to communicate and make friends; also he/she has some weird characters, which make you always feel unhappy whenever you face your roommate at home. To get a comfortable environment to live for gaining a satisfied student life, making a good study, and also getting a great relationship with your roommate and both of your friends, every student want to find a kind roomier.

Another equally significant quality of a good roommate is respectful. When a few people share a place, they should set some rules about it. For instance, it might be annoying listening to loud music during exam week, or bringing over night friends. Roommate should be clear to each other, and tell about their expectations from this commune life.

Moreover, a generous roommate would not be bad at all. Of course, it is not a requirement to share things, however, I feel comfortable in this way. For example, when I cook something I do not expect my roommate asking to eat. I like to make people feel free about these things, and I would be happier if they do the same thing for me.

In a word, most students choose their roommates who are friendly, respectful and generous. With a roommate who has a good personality, for sure my student life will become more enjoyable.

Have a good study!

Firstly, Thank for your comments

@thanh:   I absolutely know , My writing skill is not good indeed . Instead of bottling up my weakness, I confindently  post my writing here which was written myself .I ask for helps from others who discover my mistakes incorrect.I think that I can learn from my own mistakes , therefore, i don't hesitate to show my essay here .Simple I know this saying " Practice makes perfect" . I believe this saying is absolutely correct all the time. 

    Furthermore,  If you have any comments  agreement or disagreement , you had better use English language . Simply , This is an English site where people can share experiences and knowledge  which help us have more improvement..

      Thank for your commment , gook luck !

@Hoang Tuan ... I am really impressed by your essay . Highlightly ,  Your main ideas are clear and reasonable .  using the simple sentences  Instead of adding   complicated phrase , But still making the ideas are corected and logical .

           Reading this essay  and having a comparision with my essay , I found that My essay was made  a lot of  serious mistakes . Especially ,   The word choice and the combination of verb tenses are incorrect. I  suppose that Your essay is a typical illustration which I should learn  .

Thank for your sharing . i appreciate  that.

Wow!! It's is a good esay! I call it "esay" because it has full parts of a perfect esay. OK!

Me too! I like this song very much! When I heard it, the past come back to me all, and I fell happy!

I like best is the chorus of this song. I also like lyric sentence : when they get to the park, where he breaking her heart, It can really make me cry.....etc.

I don't know that you have ever heard the song"It just not the same"? It is meaningful same as Yesterday Once More. This song wa sung by many singers. All of them sing very well. In the first sentence " Stepping down from the train, Wondering would things be the same, Little did I know, It's a fact of life,  You can play the game again" , we can fell warm mind. Is it right? 

You know, I'm trying to improve my Enlish skills, so I want to talk with you everyday by email. How do you think about my suggestion. If you agrre, send me a mail greeting with the address thhndc@gmail.com. I hope I will receive your reply soon.

Goodbye.

I really love this song.

however, I can't understand some sentences, just about gammer.

Can I ask you anymore?

i think it's ok

you have good idea to write this passage, however i see your sentences that aren't connected with your writing. and the sentences as If you ask me that what is famous.....i think you use English like the way you speak Vietnamese. , the first thing you can .replace by " first of all "  to avoid repeating the word " thing " ." Because of hydroelectric plant we have the largest handmade lake in Viet Nam " actually i dont understand what your mean.and self-confident it is adj not verb you lack of to be

a lot of or lots of. no a lots of

i have no idea.

:D,first,the name of the topic,u wrote it wrong,no wonder how i cant find what the "iritate" means.

"but that was annoying me..."

"i didnt know what had happened"

"that was the first time.."

wow,ur skill of writing is good,i admire u so much.

well,i have never been in airport or travelled by plane but after reading ur story,i m sure that i wont take plane as the first choice.:D

have a good day and good luck!

That's great. But now you don't have a lot of money. Is that right? hjjjj.

if i have lots of money I'll buy a villa, super car.

That's good idea.. nice to meet you..

if i have a lot of money , i will visit  many places where there are many beautiful landscapes in Vietnamese , maybe around in  the world. It is interesting. Moreover, i will built  a big house and graden full of flower and plants  to enjoy fresh air when i am stress and sick of something hjhj

seams like you're dreaming, so let's you wake up =))=))=))

ì i have a lot of money, i will buy a villa in phu my hung buy cars,and come to around in the wold and fuck any beautiful girl i meet.

Nguyen Thanh Toan: I hope you don't have a lot of money forever.

well, if I have a lot of money, of course now I dont have, but I said if :)), I will put my money into a bank account so that I can get the very great interest rate monthly lol

btw, I dont think we should, as NguyenVanChien said, do the "wake up". just keep the dream and try hard for it. maybe someday it'll come true, we'll be absolutely extremely damn rich, who knows \m/

Good morning! I'm glad to see you again. Your thoughts are right, I supposed that almost Vietnamese people are afraid of speaking English when they communicate with foreigners because they studied too many Grammar knowledge for many years, so they always hesitate or is embarrassed when they meet face-to-face with native speakers. There are a few mistakes in your passage. Let me check:

- "consider" --> considering

- "believe on" --> believe in

- "basing on" --> based on

- "thank to" --> thanks to

- "process" --> "proccess"

- "in the beginning" --> at the beginning

- "massage" --> message

- "Thank for reading." --> Thanks for reading.

I'm terribly sorry, I make a mistake : "process" :-)

 thank  you . Bao Tuc.  Maybe you 'r right  but i'm not sure .  Frankly speaking, certainly I must be made lots of other mistakes . But I dont know how to correct .thank for your attention . 

hi

chao Huong

minh la thanh vien moi

minh rat gioi anh van

ban co the chi cho minh cach hoc cho tot ko?

thanks.

Duy khanh

It is interesting topic!!!

Your new words are rich.

Have you ever hear " The Vietnamese time"? 

Good night!

After skimming your essay, I would like to give you my opinion as follows:

- First of all, you should pay attention to punctuation, such as: full stop, comma and capital letters.

- Secondly, your vocabulary is an amazing, but you should use "traffic jam" or "regulation" instead of using "stuck traffic" or "rule". The word "use" repeated many times will make the reader uncomfortable, I think.

- Next, your coherence is not bad. 

- Finally, you have to care about the essay construction. 

Last but not least, your topic is a practical issue which should be discussed further.

i can write total content as:

-tell me

-I told- in past

-I said-in past

Nguyen say

-I speak

-we spoke- in past

that is all to remember only

love bring fresh feeling to who in its world. let's discover yourself in love...very fascinating. hehe

live slowly,love everyone more!

Hi dude, don't be so pessimistic!

I think just because you haven't found the special one in your life yet.

when you find someone who can share emotions with you and can share every small thing with you, you will find life is so beautiful and so love is :)

just take time to wait, good luck to you !

i understand about you think

love is very difficult to understand

if you inside it then you can understand a part

 I think It 's only your instant thought , Maybe You still  haven't had a true love yet.  One day when you fall in love with someone  you 'll feel what your heart saying . It happens accidentally , in a heartbeat, in a single flashing and a throbing moment.I think so .:D.

I think that you are paying attention about love a lot. If not, why do you wrote this topic.

me too! I'm a junior in Academy of Finance. My situation is the same yours.I have ever studied some of center but they won't  as my expectation. I don't listen when England spoke or comunicate with them.It's not easy to learn English. 

I 'm  also not good at English  although I have learned a long time.  To be honest , speaking is  the most important skill in Enlish  But It is the hardest skill, Almost people  are afraid of this matter. How we can speak English fluently , powerfully. It 's not easy to do .  My  weakness  is lack of confidence when speaking English.  So i also intend to join an English course  . I know a famous English center  this is Gln  where We can be taught by a well - trained staff of teacher.All of them are graduated at famous English universities.I have some friends they are learning at this center . I think you can consult and search for this center on the internet . good luck.

tx so much @lê thị hường. But I'm living in HCM city.

ban tim toi may lop luyen noi vong vong trong thanh pho chu dau

pạn Đức pít ở đâu ko thì chỉ t pít vs^^

i really like your this post ^^

I want to say congratulations due to your good result after hard working, just be yourself and work hard, no one can have any chance to talk behind your back.

Sai chính tả như: unniversity = university, eveything = everything, taked = take (:D)

 A nice writing . it dont have complex structures but  you organize ideas reasonablly and exactly . I like it.

Good

Nuoc vo tinh ngan nam troi mai

may vo tinh may mai mai bay xa

trang vo tinh , trang no dua voi gio

nguoi vo tinh ao hieu noi long toi !

THAT'S RIGHT ?

Tran Thi Cam Huong@: That's great! a lovely poem

Thanks. A nice poet.

Sorry . A nice poem

Wow ! It great

yes , A nice poem , I always miss it . I feel so sad when I read it . you ? do you agree withme ?

It's a good poem but i have not ever heard it. hjjjj. Thanks Nguyen Hoang Giang and Tran Thi Cam Huong.

terrific poem. i hope that u will share with everyone other good poem . thanks!

Easy does it ! i believe you'll sucessful . Try your best !

I hope on that day you confidently say that you did it !

Smile and smile....

 Take it easy !. You can't get success without challenging.. If you feel tired,dont give it up, take rest time to refresh  your mind   and keep try again after that . forward  the goals what  you determined to get .  ( I also a student at Ha Noi Open university , girl ) .... good luck . :)

i see. you wrotevanwparagraph clearly. i think your English is not bad. let believe and try your best. lucky to you

why are you sad?you can talk about with me.i sure you'll be heart -ache reduction.good luck!

I think you can learn by many source(film, song, internet, friend, game) try it anytime and anywhere you can. I think that's the way your E can be improve( at least the was the way i learned E ). 

I think you should slearn english by song

thanks all, it is helpful for me, i'll try