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Hi Gemini ! Nice to meet you ! Your age is the same mine and I come from Nha Trang City. According to your introduction, I think that you have learned English for 2 weeks. Now, I will show you some basic mistakes:

- "Thai Nguyen province" --> Province

- "I'm a student at Thai Nguyen University of Economics and Business Administration." --> I'm studying Economic and Business Administration at Thai Nguyen University.

- "I haven't brother or sister, when I was a child I feel very sad about it." --> Your sentence is related to the past so you must use the Simple Past - "When I was a child, I felt very sad because I didn't have brother or sister."

- "and also because It necessary for my work in the future" --> It's necessary...

- "I'm improving day after day" --> My English is improving everyday.

- "I need to communicate better with someone who is a native" --> I need to communicate with foreinger as much as I can.

- "watching the rain" --> seeing

- "I am a sweetdream" --> I often dream about sweet thing.

- "I want to get marry in The netherlands one day." --> I want to get married in Netherlands one day because I love Tulip Flower.

- "Thank you for your read to me!" --> Thanks for reading my passage.

* You should review the tense, vocabulary and punctuation carefully. *