Các bài viết đã tham gia
bạn nên ôn tập thêm phần ngữ pháp đi, pạn viết theo kiểu dịch word by word nhìu quá,hi. Một số lỗi ngữ pháp căn bản trong bài viết của bạn nè (mình chưa quan tâm nhìu đến nghĩa của câu bạn viết), I'm go to center english - sai - pải là i went to tai vì ở đây pải là thì quá khứ (2 weeks ago), và english center chứ ko pải là center english
it is toeic levels - nên sửa lại là it is a toeic training course/class hay gì đó cũng đc
you don't think im good??? là sao đây
i spent too many time to improve english skill - pải là I spent much/lots of time improving my english skills
i spent too much money for my study - spent ... on (ko for)
first time i started to classes on thursday last week , my new teacher is very beautiful and lovely - ko co' to, was chứ ko pải is vì đang nói về quá khứ, tức là cảm nhận của bạn về cô ấy trong buổi học đầu tiên
especially,she is friendly,lovely smile she is the same an angel,,,
cam on su dong gop cua ban ,minh se co gang o nhung bai sau ,vi minh con rat yeu ve mat ngu phap con cac phan khac nua , hi vong rang nhung bai viet sau cua minh ban xem va sua giup minh nha! mot lann nua rat cam on ban
After graduation, I went back home some days and I took time to help my parents' daily work. Those were the boiling hot days but the farmers have to be gone to work in the fields. I worked work as a farmer within 4 days and I really feel tired exhausted. My parents have still worked like that for 5 years. They only hope that their sons can study well in their mind. I would like to thank my parents who had worked very hard in order for me to graduate at university. Although the way forward will not be easy, I will try my best. Trust in me.
Thanks a lot!
after graduation .i will find agood job , i will earn alot of money for myself ,to help my parents,moreover i can help my sister ,i can relocate new house and buy new car after that we will travel some famous places in my country , if i have chance i will study foreign for help my job in the future.
I hope your plans will come true. I also have plans the same you.
thanks you so much ,so i need to study agood english,i used failling along time ,now i will not give up until i have successful,!
Can you translate: " i used falling along time"? I think you might have a wrong grammar. :D
mabe, it mean, i spent too many time for my study english ,but i fail
after possessive adjectives are noun
thanks you ,i hope you will help me to improve my writing skill
If I had one wish, I would wish I had one more! :D
if i had a one wish i will wish agood health for my family , because the health is the most important with me ,we have agood health we will have all anything.especially it is really essential to my parents.cause they are always encourage to overcome difficult in my life,they are really the most important with me.i wish the best for them.
bạn mắc lỗi về Thì nhìu wa', hơn nữa bạn nói theo kiểu ghép từ thì phải.
ví dụ như câu: "because my aunt have been punish police" bị sai cách chia động từ và sai cả nghĩa nữa. giả sử bạn chia đúng hìng thức của động từ thì câu trên hoặc là ko có nghĩa, hoặc là được hiểu nhầm là Gì của bạn đã phạt cảnh sát. ặc
bạn có thể viết lại như thế này:
I feel very tired and i think i'm getting ill. today was a terrible day for me. My aunt was fined (phạt tiền) by traffic police because she forgot bringing driver license and i had to pay the fine for her. When we was coming back home, it had started to rain heavily. We almost got wet then and i am having a fever now. ...
thank you , vi ki nag viet cua t k tot ,vi the t muon chia se day de cac ban sua loi giup minh de t co the cai thien ki nang nay cua t , hi vong cac bai viet tiep theo cua mih ban se giup mih sua loi nha!!thank..
Chào bạn mong cam,
Để viết được tiếng anh thì trước tiên bạn hãy cẩn thận trong việc viết Tiếng Việt. Đừng sử dụng các từ viết tắt như trên. Vì điều đo tạo nên thói quen của bạn.
Đồng thời, khi đọc bài viết tiếng Anh của bạn, mình thấy bạn đang chuyển từ Việt sang Anh với cách từ sang từ, chứ bạn chưa chú ý đến ngữ pháp, đến nghĩa của các từ. Ví dụ. Bạn nói là: Mưa rất to. Nếu chuyển như bạn thì bạn thấy đó. The rain very big. Nhưng trong tiếng Anh thì khác. The rain is too heavy.
Try your best!
thank loi dong gop chan thanh cua ban ,minh se co gang trong cac bai viet tiep theo ,hi vong ban se giup minh trong qua trinh sua loi nhung gi minh chua lam duoc,chao ban
yesterday ma sao lai dung That is vay ban???
"that is birthday my friend who is my new friend" cau nay thay y nghia ko on va loi thi nua.
Sao ban ko noi la: "My friend who i was acquainted recently held her birthday party yesterday so i gave her a notebook as a present"
thank you da dong gop y kien cho mih nha!!ki nang viet cua mih k tot lem vi the rat hi vong cac ban cho y kien cung nhu la sua loi cho nhau de cung tien bo ,
I want to improve my English in the future (not now???). I want to speak English fluently, because I think that nowadays the society is more modern, It requires us have good English skills. That is need condition for the young who want to find a good job after graduate. besides....(I don't understand this sentence).
MY FUNNY MEMORY ABOUT ONE OUR MEET WITH THE TRAVELLING NEWZEALIAN TEACHER !.
This is a my really very old story coming along with you in the same way of our learning , just consider it as one funny story in the very long time ago when we have something to think and say about the reasons for learning English. I've ever been working in the booking office in the travelling service, this is just something to memorize in that nice of my time, and I'd like to tell you as a grinning image of the very " once upon the time! " of my life ... Working as a seller ,a staff there, I was mostly selling the tickets for serving every islands tours' service to the foreigners . they're coming from many other countries in over the world . That was the most beautiful time for me to have the chances to meet many friends in their other colourful variety of cultures. They're naturally very nice and showing in their own openly warm touching welcomed to our Vietnamese for seemingly being obviously awared of knowing all our Vietnamese greetings nature normally with all relationships in world . I've met a lot of friends in many nationalities such as the German, holly nice Italians,Korean, Japanese, Dutch, United Kingdom, America, Newzealand,Canada...etc...up to now some of their home and email addresses still being kept in my book likely as a little small of my friendships' gifts and certainly that's a funny meeting of me and one deer with the 2 foreign friends, certainly not the first conversation from here... An American and A Newzealian , we had been talking to each other very openly happily about one each own country. They'd gone on tour and eaten their meal here in the cluding restaurant, I can't be rememable all the things that we had given in the chat and just one thing I coundn't be forgetful still very shy to think whenever reminding about.... After a lot of things hadling in the chat between us and a few questions and answers exchanging, I found out about the guy in a brightly nice face is from Newzealand. He said that he was a teacher, then suddenly I'm appearing in a confidently shyless voice asking him : "..Your country is very nice,right ?. Newzealand is placed in the North of my Vietnam country, is that right ???.."...After hearing this those seemingly could not help of laughing out freely without any of my doubts . After then ,I got home and hurrily took the map to check it out again, I secretly talked to myself alone :"...How misunderstanding I was..!.How carelessly I was too.!. That's why?...There was no doubt of their laughing then..!. I'm really the unutterable duck of having no doubt , Is that fair this time ...???.".
I think your writting have a few mistakes. The first, you should use "foreigner". not be "foreign person". The second, "take the test/ exam". It isn't used the test english!!! The third, "have been called". The forth, "the teacher had a lot...". the fifth, teacher pretty understood that I said. Just be my comment!!! hihihi!!! how do you do!!!
thank you very much , i hope you can help me for many writing
hihi!!! yes!!! I hope we will become good friends in near future!!!
ủa chỉ pp học tiếng anh mà sao ko thấy chỉ nói về những thành công của e nam không vậy
nhatn nam very good
your name is very special.try your best :D
you know what? we don't need vocation to become special. I don't have any vocation just like you, and i never feel shy about my seft. Let's think big. You can do anything, just try your best.
for your parent and best friend, you were a special persone. so, why do you want to pay attention? that so tired! be yourself and you will find the best way for you soon.
these things are your thinking, so from now you have to cut down it and start think about good things.
Good luck to U.
ban oi minh co vai cho muon sua cho ban, neu ban khong co van de gi thi doc vai loi minh gop y nhe:)
- I have a thinking ban nen noi la I think
- much money not many money
-discomfort la verb, nen ban dung adj la discomfortable
-frustrating la adj gay ra hanh dong, con you feel la ban bi tac dong nen dung frustrated
-I have argue mommy, y ban la sao minh chua hieu, cau nay chua ro nghia.
-as soon as the time i argue mommy cung the, minh chua hieu
-have a feel crime? co fai y ban la thay loi loi khong? thi nen dung la i always feel guitly or i always have guilty feelings
-forgive me not let forgive me, let someone do something la cho ai lam dieu gi do, con neu yeu cau thi chi van noi khong co chu ngu
-Im a high-tempered person, not im a temper.
Hy vong giup duoc phan nao cho ban.
It is sure, Thank for your help!
I have argued mommy( me to y) hi
Tuc la to tranh cai voi me to!
"as soon as...." ngay sau khi con tranh cai voi me
I won't forget your comment!
- So I have to argue with my mommy
-as soon as I argue with .. duoc roi, khong can the time dau, ma voi lai chu y gioi tu di kem voi no, la argue WITH nhe
Chuc ban hoc gioi.
I Always Argue With My Mother Although I don't Want
I love my mother and I never want to hurt her. On the contrary my thought, I always argue with her right after few sentences of our conversations. When our arguements are over, I feel guilty and I want to appoloze her and I wish to have her fogiveness, but it is very hard to talk to her about how I feel and what I wish.
Mother, I know I am a high-tempred boy, please give me time to perfect myself day by day, I promise that some day I will become a good boy. I love you so much, my mother.
Yes, I will become good with your support!
hello ,when you want to talk sorry to your mother .i think you really regret and you very love your mother,sometime i also agrue with my parents,after that i figure out my wrong thing and i say sorry to my parent,my parent forgiven for me and they felt happy when i know wrong and responsible for that thing
@ aroma: You should say On the contrary, ... or contrary to my thought,...
-phrase give me time is not wrong, but you recommend you to use phrase please let me take time to perfect ...that would be better in my point of view.
- to TTMC: @ aroma: You should say On the contrary, ... or contrary to my thought,...: THANKS<. YOU ARE RIGHT
- -phrase give me time is not wrong, but you recommend you to use phrase please let me take time to perfect ...that would be better in my point of view.----> WHAT DO YOU MEAN?
@thao: Yes, I will become good with your support!-----> Yes, I will become a good guy as I promised
you are a bad girl, you are very bad...do you know why you did appear in this earth, do you know who have been taking care you, do you know how hard they got to protect you until now, you think money can make you life happyness,or a good member in a family....a word to make others happy shouldn't be keep in your mouth or your mind
"bad girl...bad bad bad..."
Yes, Im bad, very bad. I know,.I'm sorry for all my actions
don't be shy , when you are start study that is you part success, try try to overcome
fun không giống happy, fun là buồn cười, mắc cười mang nghĩa cười ko bình thường, có gì tác động
ví dụ: bộ phim thiệt là buồn cười, anh hề làm hài buồn cười quá " fun"
my thuan bridge, i m from vinh long you too , nice to meet you
Me too, i have a difficult talking befor people but you don't give up
you have to be more confident
i hope you got success hihihi
never say die
i'm completely opposite to you. I can't speak English too much but i really want to talk English. When I have chances to talk English class in my , I don't know what to talk? .But I'm still trying. I never give up. Wish you a good success.
i'm very scare when i say something wrong so it difficult to me to talking in english, it is a big problem which i must through.
i very worry about english ,becaue it very important for my job in the furture, my parent always hope me talk english fluenly,everytime i come back my house ,my mother ask me talk english to listen my mother ,but i dont confident to speak because i dont know talk so much ,i always to chide myself,i m very sad because i make my mother disappointed about me,but now i have done my best,i will try to overcome challenge to my mother proud of me
i hope you also overcome it ,i think you will overcome it if you really "want"
Dont care about talking right or wrong, just only u speak and everyone understand what u say, it is the most important,
Try ur best and talking as u never have a chance to talk again ..:))
I think speak English truly, it's importance. Because when you speak wrong, it can become a bad habits and foreiner can't understand. But when you can speak english, you are a confidence person. Trying to speak and speak truly. Good luck.
thank you for your comments!
children not childens
and i hope one day your dream will come true
if you are really like sing , you should try try to overcome it , because you really success when you really like it!!! good luck
BAI VIET CO' Y HAY NHUNG NHIEU LOI WA
I think you are just amazing, you have talent so don't waste what other people are dreaming to have. I dreamed being a singer too but my voice againsts me :))) I keep singing regardless of talking bad.
Life is just dreaming, if you don't, you are living of someone's life. I like to hear your collection!
How can you find a good job after graduating?
What do you think the good job is?
What will you do to make your dream come true?
Give me some ideas...!!!
my view i think good job i can work true my major with salary stable, i will try to good study especially i will try to speak english fluently because it really essential for my major
thank for your comment ,i hope we will have chance to experient change study or life
i understand your thought and i want to know what department are you studying now?
my major tourism
trung thu: Mid- autumn festival
In mid - autumn festival, i allways remember to best memories when i was child. i want to go home now, living HCM city i feel unhaapy.
yes,where are your hometown