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i think it's ok

you have good idea to write this passage, however i see your sentences that aren't connected with your writing. and the sentences as If you ask me that what is famous.....i think you use English like the way you speak Vietnamese. , the first thing you can .replace by " first of all "  to avoid repeating the word " thing " ." Because of hydroelectric plant we have the largest handmade lake in Viet Nam " actually i dont understand what your mean.and self-confident it is adj not verb you lack of to be

a lot of or lots of. no a lots of

i have no idea.

nice, congratulation to interesting girl ! i am looking forward to your next writing :D

Your sharing is funny, You're a lucky person.

you are right. as we know that everything can happen and it mainly depends on ourselves. so, we let try our best and we have the right to be proud of our country, poor or rich is not important. the most important here is that how we think about it

Hi

Trang Nguyen

i want make friend with you.

nice to be your friend and look forward to hear your story, i love the Central people. they are the one who can overcome any difficulties and win at last. wish best things to you

@trang nguyen: I would like to correct some of your mistakes. If you dont mind I will go for it:)

- let me introduce not let's me

- new words

- at first or firstly, not the first

- personal infomation/private information, not individual information. individual la ca nhan, khi ban so sanh voi tap the nhe.

- Firstly, let me introduce about my personval/private information

- Is it too late to study english?

- it takes 180km

- cai cau get out of range of village bamboo la sao vay ban, minh chua hieu?

-But there is a decision to change my life. That is in the second section." minh chua hieu y nay cua ban.

-respectively,secondly not the second

- major of ....

- Eventually / finally not at last, at last khi nao ban dung cho 1 trat tu liet ke, con y cua ban la cuoi cung, rot cuoc...

- became not becomed

- I wrote a lot to talk about ... or I have a lot of writing to talk... ban dung use a lot of writing nghe hoi ky ky

- the third van khong duoc, thu nhat la phai dung thirdly, thu hai la day la liet ke cuoi cung ban nen dung at last nhe.

=== I hope you will like what I have just done.

@serena anna

Thanks for correcting Trang Nguyen!

Nice!

Nice to meet you!

Your introduction very good. I like it!  Congratulation

@serena: thank for your correction. This is reason I want to write more.

Get out of range of bamboo : thoát khỏi, đi ra khỏi lũy tre làng.

I'll try to become better, wait for it. Love to all

@trang nguyen? good for you if you try your best, but range la day, loai... neu ra khoi luy tre lang thi ban chi can noi la get out of my bamboo village.the word range is not appropriate to this case.

Hope you will get better.

The more you practice, the more fluent you are.