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Read the article about Black Friday: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_Friday_%28shopping%29
thank you so much
your esay really smooth ! *_*
convinient = convenient
informations => information ( ko có số nhiều nhé)
they help (not: helps).
I have read (Shoudn't: I have known)
he has played online.... eating, sleeping (not: eatting, sleepping)
Nguyen Anh Duong: Tks for your cmt.
nguyen van hien: it was my mistake when i typed. tks any way.
Tan, Khien, rua con: thanks alot.
t vừa thi bài này sáng nay...sao hqua mình kho đọc nhỉ
who always helps everybody
to get the knowledge
always stands beside the students
when they have problems.
Thanks for being my teacher.
Happy Teachers Day! "
Happy Teacher`s Day.Its a special day to remember all our teachers who taught us something in our life
and always stands beside the students
Better way: "Teacher is a person who always helps everybody to enrich/widen the knowledge and
always stands beside the students
Firstly, tks for r comment! But when we were child, did we have any knowkledge? So I think Teacher is people who help us get knowledge gradually.Personally, maybe your title be more suitable to point Teacher in a higher level of education? How do you think about it?Yr comment is welcome
never hurt any one and say "sorry" by then. you 'd rather determind before you act.
thanks so much!
a matter of great significance!
It's really an intelligent dog.
many people who have been in prison are very intelligent :D
very very very very funny story ^_^
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His son's reply was: "Go for it and plant your potato garden. That is the best I could do for you, from the prison." -->?
Ha.ha . thanks for your story. The son is very intelligent.
Wow!! It's is a good esay! I call it "esay" because it has full parts of a perfect esay. OK!
Me too! I like this song very much! When I heard it, the past come back to me all, and I fell happy!
I like best is the chorus of this song. I also like lyric sentence : when they get to the park, where he breaking her heart, It can really make me cry.....etc.
I don't know that you have ever heard the song"It just not the same"? It is meaningful same as Yesterday Once More. This song wa sung by many singers. All of them sing very well. In the first sentence " Stepping down from the train, Wondering would things be the same, Little did I know, It's a fact of life, You can play the game again" , we can fell warm mind. Is it right?
You know, I'm trying to improve my Enlish skills, so I want to talk with you everyday by email. How do you think about my suggestion. If you agrre, send me a mail greeting with the address firstname.lastname@example.org. I hope I will receive your reply soon.
I really love this song.
however, I can't understand some sentences, just about gammer.
Can I ask you anymore?
So nice . I am actually impressed by your useful writing . It is more supprising when I could listen to the melodious tunes as well as a nice voice at the same time. This song is really killing my mind . I don't know the reason why but it's bring me a strange feeling that i have not had before .
Everyone also has their own idols and of course not excepting me. I am a big fan of Cellin Dion . Her voice is really sweet and harmonious. I am keen on her style most , The special style that no one has. The song " My heart will go on" which is one of her greatest successes, This song quickly attracted attention from people in all over the world .
Besides, My English skill could be improved when listening and enhancing throughly the meaning of these songs. Really , It 's a smart way to learn English , especially , our listening and pronunciation skill will be raised very soon. Also , to enrich and your vocabulary as well.
Each person also has their own stratergy to learn English, As my own way I often spend my spare time listening some favourite English songs. It not only help me to release my stress and pressure , improve my English skills as well . To find out a suitable way to raise our English is not easy , Importantly you have an inspiration and an insight into it.
thank for your writing , A nice topic worth caring about.
It takes me 2 times to read and enhance carefully your writing. And i sumarized some main ideas of this issue . This is actually a nice topic that is worth debating you raised the reasons persuasively sufficiently. I absolutely agree with you . In my opinion, I think that Strictness is very necessary at school.Teacher had better be strict to make sure student dont break reputations in school . Of course , Vietnamese student don t have the voluntary self-concious of studying . Some students They study because of their parents 's control, somes they are under a lot of pressure .Therefore , teacher should make some strict disciplines and then require them to follow seriously. On the other hand ,Certainly It will make student being unpleasant . Some They will find out some trick way to protest and cheat their teacher or parents . For example, giving student a lot homeworks and tests which need to completed in a short time , It maybe makes them feel excessive and overwhelmed . It's easy leading to effect of stress .
" you can not have get ..."so what does that mean ? there are 2 ways if you use " have " , must odd get and else. that is my opinion
Your essay is very good. Keep doing but I still want to make it perfect. I always try towards perfection. If you agree I'm going for it now:d
- Nowadays, economy is improving a lot. We use economy - a noun instead of economic - an adj. But in my point of view, I will use this structure Today's economy is improving a lot. Because economy stands alone makes it a kind of weird. But it's ok.:d
- The rate of the rain forest is shortened so fast (passive voice)
- smoke of vehicles not dust of vehicles
Only three mistakes I think you made. But that is very good of you. Keep going!
Hope you like this.
good essay. Evironment is getting worse. we have to protect it. If environment is bad , it will affect to your health and life .
Hi Vu Le Son, after reading your essay and Serena anna's comments, i think i must try more and more to keep up with many members of Hellochao.
thank you about your post.
very good! a problem is not new but U expressed very well. i like it.
i like your writing and agree with your oppinion. this topic i have ever discussed so much time in my studying. and i think you have good ideas, let's try to develop it.
Hi!!! I think you really good! But you should use " Prefer doing s.th to doing s.th" hihi!!!! how do you do!!!
what a mean story !
A man takes his lovely cat to the market for his purpose of selling her. The cat's never known very clearly about her owner's ideas, so she's willingly ready to get into a cage obediently after her yelling some high voice sounds up in the air. The owner was whispering secretly to himself and swearing that he'd do the best with his business on selling the cat at any price so honestly waiting for someone to come and take her as soon as possible in the market ,a lot of people passing by and nobody seeing her cute openly big eyes in the very curious way, then a woman suddenly stopped seeing the cat carefully and asking the both owner and his cat. She said to the cat very exciting : " Wow !, mieil !, how about you baby ?...". and then said to the man : " Tell me this !. Would she positively like to catch mice ?..". The man answered her right away without any delay : .. No, no !. What's the kind of your questions would you like touching me ?... She's very special, yeah !. I think only my cat herself has ever been saying : " No games..!." to the mice ! and unwillingly saying : " No way..!." to the work. She doesn't like seemingly to caugh mice , she specifically love wandering around, catching the babies chickens. Why would I sell her if she loved catching mice..?.
A meaningful story. Thanks !
Money is very necessary, but it's not everything in life.
The important thing is that it depends on the purpose and scope of use.
Thanks for your writing.
Thanks for your comment.
Nguong mo ban- ban viet duoc bai dai qua.
I quite agree with you.
Therefore, recognizing what is the root cause and supporting considerable solutions are really necessary for preventing violence at school.
Therefore, recognizing what is the root cause and supporting considerable solutions is really necessary for preventing violence at school.
Thank Vu Le Son. I'm very happy when you take tome to read and correct my mistakes in writting!
- Editting some sentences shorter.
- Adding some sentences for conclusion of the journal.
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