childhood is the nicest period of time in our life. Whether this is happy or sad memories, which bring us to the special feeling when we think about them. I also have a memorable childhood and one of facts ,which I can't forget,is my first school day.
when I was six, like other children,I had to go to school, although I didn't like that. therefore, I was crying all that day to beg my mother to allow me to stay at home instead of going to school. then,my mother approved of my desire with a condition which I had to do housework. No any hesitation, I agree with my mother immediately. At first, I washed up dishes, swept the floor ...enthusiastically. however a moment later,I felt really tired and didn't want to do more anything. At that time,my mother walked to my side and said: " If you don't go to school, you won't have any knowledge and in the future you will have to work much harder than what you do today." And From then on I started to take my studies seriously.
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Phổ thông- childhood với memory(ies) có vẻ không ... liên quan ... lắm. Nên, paragraph đầu như thừa. Chỉ cần 1 câu để nhập.
whether ... or để nói 1 chọn k0 chắc, hoặc k0 chắc sẽ xảy ra. Câu của bạn dùng "no matter" thì hơn. Cái which cắt mất 2 ý rời nhau ra:
a- No matter how happy our childhoods are, they bring us to the special feeling when we think about them.
b- Our childhoods are whether happy or sad, they bring us to the special feeling when we think about them.
- "can't forget" thừa, vì mệnh đề đầu đã có memorable.
- with a condition under which (người Việt hay nhầm, vì nói, trong điều kiện, hoặc với đk).
- No any hesitation, I agree = Having no hesitation, ... (Đừng đem văn nói vào văn viết)
- to beg my mother to allow me to stay at home = to beg my mother for staying at home.
Mà như thế, "staying at home instead of going" nghe ... cân đối hơn.