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During the past few years , there have enomous development in the field of technology . However , if human dependen on technology too much , it will cause serious cosequences . The first , not only does watching television or playing computer games for a long time lead to some social issues but also cause eyes related to problems , especialy youngsters . The second , young people wuould rather use e-mail or facebook than communicate face to face ; Therefore , it is easy to see the scene that many people sit aruond a table without talking , just staring at their personal technologycial devices . Besides , too many people are attracted by online games where they might be a hero or a winer . this will hinder the young generation from expressing themselves in the real life . the last but not least , although technology plays a vital role in our life , we should be aware of consequences of relying heavily on technologycial gadgets .
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