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Hello Ms.Ngoc and all other students!

I wanna to improve my English writing skill, and I think if I can join on this section, it'll be a good way to start
my process. I'd appreciate if anyone could give me any comment.

"Stay hungry, stay foolish"

One of the great legend talents of computer industrial field is Steve Jobs. His life with all of dedication and commitment for personal computer revolution will be always the reverence of billion people in the world include in me. Although he
passed away so soon, he still gave us many kinds of valuable presents. "Stay hungry, stay foolish" was become my best advice that I knew from him in every time I want to make any refused decision or any new ideal.

So, what's exactly meaning of this statement? How could it motivate all of us to get up and make a lot of achievements like that? If you've ever spent your youth, you've could never forgot about all of the significant marks when you
want to do some new things to change your life or even just change your current position. Sometimes I satisfied with my current work and don't want to waste time to think or do any change. But all of us never know about our hidden
depths of talent and also never know what will be going on in the future.. Everything we can do is never stopping
refreshing and ready to welcome all of possible results. In my opinion, Steve Jobs used that statement to wish everyone never give up their continuous desire and always be brave to face the unexpected risk which could happen. The most importance is we believe in ourseft and keep going on the process even with slim hopes by any generated ideal.

That valuable quotation is not Steve Jobs's. It derived from a worldwide brochure. Steve Jobs just kept that statement to drive his life and advised us should have a right attitude based on it. With all of our admiration for him, we could easily get the absolute confidence to follow that guidance and approach our unpredictable achievements.

seven job = unemployer :D

The writing is so great!

Hi Bich Ngoc and all!

" Stay hungry, stay foolish". The first time when some months ago I saw this statement, I had to log in youtube to search Steve Job. Athough my listening english skill is not good, but I have listened his speech which I guested word and watching his body language more what he said. 

In fact, Steve Job has given us a well lesson, a well advise. We who are almost very young but afraid of failure, don't dare to pursue our own dream. 

Sorry, My writing skill is not good. I will improve in shortest time. I believe on myself

Hi everyone. In fact when I see this topic, I didn't have any idea in my mind but I see it 's useful to broaden your knowledge if we spend time researching  about this topic ..

ok let's start to discuss now : I think deeply of this saying "stay hungry, stay foolish" My mind arose some thoughts and ideas about its figurative sense to process an essay ."Stay hungry,  stay foolish" which was quoted of Steve Job during his speech at Stanford University.

First of all, In my opinion, "stay hungry,,'the figurative sense we shouldn't be too easily  satisfied and comfortable with things we  have. Instead, keeping  thirst for knowledge and opening your mind  anytime, discovering some new things continuously .Steve Job 's message have a huge influence  covering to all people in the world ,especially encouraging  to the younger generation grow  enthusiasm  to achive their considerable ambitions ..secondly,"stay foolish" what does it mean?...Even If you are a talent or proficient  person with huge knowledge but  you should stay foolish and keep learing  new things, always think about "what can you do and what can't do ,,.On the other hand. you shouldn't being  pleased  with  your achievements ..when you feel "starving for challenges more" with more perfection yourself.

In Steve Job  famous Stanford commencement speech Jobs urged eager students to "Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish".raising for younger generation  with constant indulgence in their goals to ottain the successes.

That 's cover all my opinions about this topic. Certainly, I find It 's narrow in ideas and expanding matter . It makes lots of mistakes ....please correct when you find the mistakes here...thanks

               Hello, everyone!

        The first thing I would like to say thanks to all of you!

        I have just read all what you wrote above. 

        I find that your writing ( Miss Tra, Mr Huy....) is very very well. Keep writing!

        Through the statement " Stay hungry, stay foolish" ( Steve Job), I think  this is a good chance for me to send something impressive to who want to learn English deeply like you and others.

        To be frank, I pick it up hearing from my teacher. Because I am a very curious person ; therefore I find his speech on Internet. Sound interesting! This is a meaningful saying for all young peope  over the world. 

         In fact, I do not understand the content that he want to mention right after his stories. And it s  difficult for me to know because I simply stranlate word by word. 

         Finally, Everything become all right after my teacher s explaining.

         One of the meanings is your idea.But the bottom line here is strong will. Have you ever felt bored or discouraged ? I am sure a favor that you will say is " Yes". Someone said to me sometime they never do anything because they feel too tired in the very long time at that moment. They worried  about what happen to them in the future with your sad spirit. Overrall, They do not have anything: no energy, no money, no dearm, no health, no endurance, no patient..... And they last the worst forever in their life.

         " Stay hungry, stay foolish" want to send a message to you that you always feel  thirsty and try to find out a lot of water. But where you can find and how way you use and how you go to there ..... That means you must suffer from troubles which block you to success.Our life is getting more and more wonderful and meaningfull if you live with your dream. But that is not enough. You need to fight to finall breath.

           Now common you! No matter what, only know that try to do what you want because you live once in the world, not twice. Do not heasitate anything!

            " What do you want to do the best?" Take action!

             Do not wait for the ages before you become tired...

And I am here to speak to you that you must dream and dream but more wonderfull thing will happen to you if you win your delay . Look at the brigh side of life! Good success! I hope you like my writing!

             All best for you and your family!

                                                                                          From Miss Ngoc!

              Hi, my friend, Huong!

        Your wrting is very good!

        You have gave some ideas for writing like the main content in an essay in English. But it seems to lack the beggining and the end. I can suggest the end of your writing as follows: " To me and others , the saying encourage me in the operation of studying. It s like a strong slogan. Take action as soon as you think anything. Do not stop desiring and trying for my future".... and maybe you can write same other things......

        But say Huong, try to write more exactly :

1. Spend a little time on search/find/read some information...( dàng/chi phí thời gian để làm gì)

2. Try to express what are going to write before put your pen on the site/

3. Arrange the ideas how to be more suitable

        I hope you can learn from your mistakes!

        Waiting for your changes in learning English!

         Good success and thank for your writing very much!

        Have a good night!

thanks for your useful comment .I 'm really glad  because you pointed out my mistakes in my writing..From your writing I 'll learn how to organize an outline and supporting points for an essay. Your  heartfelt assesses  made an strong impression on my mind.basing on it I 'll change the methods of writing in next times.thanks ...

hi Miss Ngoc, Miss Tra and all!

In my opinion, Your wring are so great. I admire you very much. If you have sprare time and feel interested in topics which are same this topic, you should post to be discussed by people. I'm waiting for your new topics.Have a nice day!

Thank for all of good comment!

         There are many English skills we have to learn here.

          And one of them is writing. More writing more perfect.

          By this way, you also speak English quickly and fluently. Moreover, if you have some plans to pass exam such as : Test, ielts or Toffle and so on. Make sure that you will know that it s impressive for you to go on in the next time.

          However, my advices for you is to try to focus on a certain topic deeply before conducting a new topic.The reason here is the way to help you over and over again ( it means you do something over and over again). You can retain all words, phrases how to be not only easy but also more correct.

          And right after this topic, I am sure giving many interesting topic help you have core vocabularies in the short time.

          And a final saying for you is strong slogan !

                   " If you want to shine tomorrow, you need to sparkle today"!

                      Now, I am afraid I must fly!

                      See you soon in the new topic!