Hounted house 1

Kiều Nguyễn - 18/07/2012 09:01

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My name is Anna. I'm sixteen years old. I have a trip to the forest. I walk to the forest. I walk very far, and, I'm in front of the forest. It's very cool! I go into the forest. Sunddenlly, I see dark. I'm scared now. I run out, but the sky not morning now- is night! I go into the forest again to find a cave to sleep. Then I see a house. The big house. I think that I'm lucky, I run to the house and knock. "Knock... knock... knock" Nobody answer. I push the door. It's open! I'm going to the house, and then, I shout: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Why?

( to be continued)

phí thị kim ngân - 18/07/2012 11:06

hahaha.Anna really be baby.but this story quite interesting.why in forest full dark have got a big house again???hi hi.i am curious about too that???i will wait part continued of the story

phí thị kim ngân - 18/07/2012 11:56

my name is NGAN.i'm twenty-five years old.i have had a trip in the forest.i walked in the forest and i have gone very far.and in front of me is a forest very cool.i went into the forest.sunddenlly.i saw dark and then i felt very scared.i run to turn back the old way but sky pitch-dark and not still light.i went around the forest and looked for a cave to sleepy.oh my god...look out...i have saw a house.the big very house.i thought that i am really lucky.i run quick to the house and knock.nobody answer.i pushed the door ,it's open.and step inside..........

hihi.i tell again by the way that i understant.i have correct any place.hope is true with your mean.

Minh Bui - 18/07/2012 12:42

you should use past tense.

Kiều Nguyễn - 19/07/2012 07:52

thanks Ngan! I like to write story by your way but I can't thinking. :->

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