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I'm My and 20 years old.I'm a single girl.I'm from Hong Ngu district,Dong Thap provice but I live in boarding house in Can Tho city.Because I'm a students (of) Can Tho University.There are five people in your (my) family.My family are farmers faner.My parents and two brother(s) are hard-work(ing) to earn money for me (my) study.I to be move on this (câu này không hiểu ý bạn) .I know,we hope I always (hope to) achieve great success in life.So,I (frequently) frequence try (to) study to (get) award(s) (from) of school.I hope that (it will make me feel) be happy and smile for us and I do it..but until (now) I can't study english,,,It's (a) terrible and  (serious) obstacle biggest of (to) me,,,althought I can reading (and) understand all pargaraph(s) (in) english but I can't (even do an English exercise correctly) write once lesson english follow order proper,so I fell (feel) frustrated when I (am) writing..now I want improve English it,,so,I borrow post(ed) many of  my writings of me pick up (in this) forums to and hope (that) all you (all can) fix mistakes for me...if you can (With your) help I will achieve (success) succesful in the fulure...Thanks for reading.

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I'm My and 20 years old.I'm a single girl.I'm from Hong Ngu district,Dong Thap provice but I live in a boarding house in Can Tho city.Because I'm a student (of) Can Tho University.There are five people (MEMBERS )in your (my) family.My family are is farmers.My parents and two brother(s) are hard-work(ing) to earn money for me (my) study.I to be move on this (câu này không hiểu ý bạn) .I know,we (THEY) hope I always achieve great success in (MY) life.So,I (frequently) frequence try (to) study to (get) award(s) (from) of school (OR GET A SCHOLARSHIP).I hope that (it will make them feel) happy and smile (on their lips) and I do (did) it..but until (now) I can't study (be good at) english,,,It's (the most) terrible and  (serious) obstacle (to) me,,,althought I can reading (and) understand all pargaraph(s) (in) english but I can't (even do an English exercise correctly) write once (a) lesson english follow(-ing) (proper) order proper,so I fell (feel) frustrated when I (am) writing..now I want (to) improve English it,,so,I (posted many my writtings on this forum) borrow post(ed) many of  my writings of me pick up (in this) forums to and hope (that) all you (all can) fix mistakes for me...if you can (With your) help I will achieve (success / more) succesful in the future...Thanks for reading.

Mot vai gop y chu in dam. HI vong ban se co gang hon. Minh thay ban nen hoan thien ve ngu phap roi cach dien dat cau. Vi co nhieu cho ban dien dat con lung cung. Tuy nhien, khoi dau nhu vay la cung tot roi do ban. Chuc ban luon thanh cong.

Tang ban hai thanh ngu: " no pain no gain and nothing is impossible"

Than men!