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Most students have to start work after graduating from university and due to some reasons, some of them still live with their family while others have to move out and live independently. These two types of living are different in many ways. Firstly, living with family differs from living independently in that it helps them avoid financial problems. At home, they have water bills, electricity bills and other daily expenses paid by their parents. In contrast, people living independently have to pay all those things on their own. Secondly, they also have different living condition. People living at home can enjoy better living condition than ones living independently. Home is normally large and well-equipped with modern facilities. Moreover, they do not have to do too much housework. On the contrary, rent house are usually small with poor facilities and they have to do everything on themselves. Finally, the other difference of these two types of living is that living independently provides them more freedom than living with their parents. Parents always set a wide range of rules for them. For example, they have to ask their parents for permission if they want to go out or invite friends to their house. Whereas, people living independently have more privacy, so they can go out whenever and wherever they want with anyone without any complaint. In conclusion, each type of living has its own advantages and disadvantages. Therefore, it doesn't matter what they choose, they can still enjoy their wonderful life.
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