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Motivation letter
My addrees
My full name
My phone number
My email
Company name
Company addrees
Date
Dear,
First of all, I would like to thank you so much for your attention regarding my information that I have submited for ELCA Internship Program at the Consultancy Career Fair of Post & Telecommunication Institute of Technology on May 12th, 2012.
I think it is very important for me to get practical experience and develop my skills that I have studied in the university. No education is complete without experience. I am very insterested in ELCA Internship Program when I heard a friend of mine, who joined ELCA Internship Program, talk about professional working culture, spirit of the team, excellent facilities of ELCA. So, I am very honour if I would become a member of this program.
I have developed some small computer program in C/C++, Java, C#... I have ability to work alone or work as part of a team. I am good at reading and listening in English. I also am willing to learn and do what take to get a job done well even under pressure. I am confident that I will provide values to your company in this program.
I have enclosed a copy of my CV and I would like very much to meet with you to discuss your open position. Should you have any questions, please contact me at the above adress.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
.....
phan thi thach
Winnie
Phổ thôngHi,
There're some mistakes in your writing so I just make some comments on it as my opinion.
Hi everyone. I'd like to show you my motivation (usually people use the term "application") letter that I will send to a company that where I'll apply for the Internship program in this summer. Please fell feel free to tell where I am wrong. Thanks.
NameMy addrees
Address My full name
My phone number
My email
Company name
Company addrees
Date
Dear ... ( it's better if you state the name of receiver but if you don't know the name, just put sir/madam is all right)
Subject Heading (purpose of this letter) - Application for the Intership Program
First of all, I would like to thank you so much for your attention regarding thank you for your interest in my information that I have submited for ELCA Internship Program at the Consultancy Career Fair of Post & Telecommunication Institute of Technology on May 12th, 2012.
( I don't quite understand about your purpose of writing this letter. In here, it means they've asked you to submitted your CV for the program right? - I just correct some grammar for you)
I think In my opnion, it is very important to get gain practical experiences and develop improve my skills that I have studied in the university. No education is completed without experience pratice. I am very insterested in ELCA Internship Program when I heard after hearing from a friend of mine, who joined ELCA Internship Program talking about professional working culture (ethic / environment sounds better) , spirit of the team team spirit, and excellent facilities of ELCA. So,Therefore, I am very honour if I would become a member of this program. It would be an honor if I can be a part of this program/ I will be graceful if be accepted to join this progam
I have developed some small computer program in C/C++, Java, C#... I ability to work alone can work on my own (work under pressure is also a good word) or work as part of a team (work well with others). I am good at reading and listening in English (should say " I am fluent in English especially in reading and listening" but usually people prefer speaking & writing). I also am am also willing to learn and do what take to get a job done well even under pressure ( do my best to complete the given tasks efficiently) . I am confident that I will provide values ( Afterall, It makes my confident to become a great player) to your company in this program.
I have enclosed a copy of my CV along with this letter and ( hope to have a chance to express my enthusiasm about this program to you in a real person ) I would like very much to meet with you to discuss your open position. Should you have any questions(need any further information), please contact me at the above adress do not hesitate to contact me
Thank you for your time and consideration. reading. I look forward to your response.
Yours faithfully,
You should sign here with your full name too
Cheers :D