MY FAMILY
HELLO EVERYONE, MY NAME IS HUYEN. MY ENGLISH NAME IS SARAH OR SUZIE OR ELIZABETH. U CAN CALL ME ONE OF THEM. TODAY I WANT TO TELL U ABOUT MY FAMILY. MY FAMILY HAS 4 PEOPLE: MY FATHER, MY MOTHER, MY SISTER AND ME. MY FATHER IS A EMPLOYER OF A BIG COMPANY. HE IS VERY KIND AND HANDSOME. I LOVE HIM VERY MUCH. EVERY DAY HE GETS UP AT 6 AND GO TO WORK AT 7. HE IS INTERESTED IN CONTROL THE CARGO OR SOMETHING FROM OVERSEAS. BUT I LOVE MY MOTHER BEST. NO LETTERS CAN BESCRIBE THE HARD WORKING IN HER. SHE IS A TEACHER, SHE TEACHES COMPUTER SCIENCE. ALTHOUGH SHE DOESN'T TEACH OTHER SUBJECT BUT I THINK SHE IS GOOD AT MATH AND LITERATURE. ESPECIALLY, SHE IS VERY BAD AT ENGLISH. HER FOODS ARE VERY DELICIOUS AND AFTER EVERY MEALS,I FELL SO FULL. MY SISTER IS A STUDENT IN A PRIMARY SCHOOL. SHE IS IN GRADE 3. SHE IS VERY NICE AND WONDERFUL. SHE LEARNS VERY WELL AND OF COURSE SHE IS A CLASS LEADER.I LOVE MY FAMILY SO MUCH.:))))))))) :DDDDDDDDD :*****??? HOW DO U FELL AFTER READING MY PRAGRAPH??????????IS IT GOOD????????
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Phổ thôngI think your paragraph will be better, if you add information about you to this paragraph :3 :)))