MY HOUSE
I have a housein the countryside.I live with family in it.It is a small and old house, over 22 year.In front of my house, there is a long river where i often went swimming when i was young.On the right house, there is a vegetable graden. It provides many fresh vegetable for my family. On the left.there is a pond. my family feeds many fish in it. This is the best place for me to relax by fishing at the weekend. behind my house is a large rice field.It is an interesting place for one to fly a kite in summer. It is very fresh and comfortable insidemy house.the living room isn't big but it is quite clean.i have a bookshelf against the wall, a notbook on the desk,a wardrobe opposite to the bed and a big photo of my family on the wall.Especially, it have a window overlooking the field to get fresh air. This is the thing i like most.in conclusion. i love my house very much.It is really warm and happy place for me.I wish to live in it long life.
Phạm Tiến Định
Phổ thôngFabulous, you essay is very good. But I think, there is some mistakes, including:
- It have -> it has
- It is really warm and happy place -> we need an article here, It's really a warm and happy place
- It is an interesting place for one -?? for everyone or for children
- Feeds many fish -> raises is a better choice
-Over year -> Over 22 years