my perents !

VI TIEU BAO - 24/11/2012 10:38

a litter bit of my sharing ^^ . sorry if it have mistake!

my parent is one . my mother is also my father . sometime i felt sad because i don't have emotion of the father like every one . but when i grew up i think the life is fair , if you lose one thing you i will received another thing . i don't have the interest of my father but i have full emotion of my mother . my mom love me very much . she is used to staying up late and getting up early to earn money and bring up me . every time i feel boring and lazy i alway think about my mom . thinking about all she has done for me . it made me stronger and more confident . when i got trouble i often call for her and her gave me some advice to pass over the truoble . i love my mom so much !!!

htphatit - 24/11/2012 19:05

Mother is always the wonderful person!!

Đinh Thị Tuyết - 24/11/2012 23:36

me too, i love my parents very much.I try to sucessful in oder my parent can proud of me, I love my mom and daddy very much. They are my life.

ngodiep - 25/11/2012 15:12

so do i. my parents are always cheering up my life. I feel so lucky when the god gives me my wonderful parents... but sometimes i did't make them being happy... i will try my best to make them proud of me. and tell them how much i love them.

phann123 - 27/11/2012 11:16

Me too anh my father

Za Wi - 19/02/2013 20:43

Your writing makes me moving, so much...But I have to fix some mistakes for you

1.when i grew up i think the life is fair => when i grow up i think the life is fair

2.when i got trouble i often call for her => when i got trouble i often called for her

ect...

( You often get mistake about using tense in one sentense ^^!)

3.you i will received another thing => you will receive another thing

4.my mom love me very much => my mom loves me very much

5.bring up me => bring me up

6.her gave me some advice => she gave me some advice

Hope you enjoy your present life. I always love the optimistic one like you!

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