letieuphuong
My village
Like all villages in countryside, my village is a place of quite and peace. When the rock crow a sign of a new day, many peoples get up early to do various kind of activities. In house the old man wear formal clothes, standing in front of altar to express gratitively to their ancestor and pray for through happy and luckily day. Then they gather to drink tea and share their experiments about taking chidren and grandchildren , doing graden.... The man go for work in the field. They carry following some graden tools, foods and water in case they finish thier work late. The woman do household chore such as cleaning house, washing clothes, preparing a simple meal and supporting their children for school. The old woman go for a walk to get good health. To the children, some go to school. Some work with their parents in the field when having free time for school. In conlusion, my village is a good place to live .
Bùi Hồng Diễm
pham thi thanh
Green Star
Phổ thôngthere are some basic errors in your essay.
Ex:
- a place of + N: but "quite" is not a noun
- peoples => No. "People" is a plural noun. There is no "peoples" word in English
- luckily day => No. "luckily" is adv. In this case, you have to use an adj. It means "lucky day"
- the man go ..... => the man goes or the men go. ok?
- graden => what? it means "garden". I saw you use graden twice times. There is no this word in the dictionary
- foods => No. the plural noun of food is food. Some examples: man - men, woman - women, child - child, tooth-teeth, goose-geese, fish-fish, ox-oxen,mouse-mice...
- the woman do => the women do or the woman does
- the old woman go for..... => the same error