please correct for me, thanks all of you
Good bye my hometown, good bye my family, my friends good bye all things related to my hometown , tomorrow I'll go to Sai Gon to work and study. I want to live in my hometown with my family but I must go to Sai Gon because of my life, if I live in my hometown I can't help my family when they need me.
I go to Sai Gon to study all things around me related to my life. I must find out for my life the good way but I must consider my family as my life, I love my Parents so much and I don't want to live without them, I never want to be a bad son in my family, my mother is sick, my father is old , I must take care of them when they need me, if I do it I'll be comfortable but my Parents will be sad because I'll never have a beautyful life in the future therefore I must come to Sai Gon to study all things new and I must try my best to study more and more , knowledge in the world is so rich and I'm a normal person therefore I must work hard and study a lot, I'll never success if I'm lazy, I must choose the best way for my life.
This time I go to Sai Gon with my passion heart and beautyful dream, I put my target is take the certification of toeic 600(I'm not sure but I will try my best) I'm chasing my dream become a designer in mechanical manufacturing , I usually want to find out a good job to change my life , I don't want to be a poor person in the future. I had lived in Sai Gon 4 years and Sai Gon had taken my younger,my health,my love, my care of my Parents, now I return Sai Gon, I want to take for me a good job, a beautiful life ,I hope I can success as soon as I come to Sai Gon, please give me a chance to change my life
My Parents, I love you so much but I must leave you ,please pray for me and for give me when I can't take care of you
Good bye all of you
(if I make any mistakes, please correct for me, thanks all of you)

ILOVE SUMMER
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Za Wi
Phổ thôngGood bye my hometown, good bye my family, my friends good bye all things relating/that relate to my hometown...(but I must go to Sai Gon because of my life =>[better way: but I must go to Sai Gon for my future life)
I go to Sai Gon to study all things around me relating to my life [....] I'll never be successful/ succeed/get success if I'm lazy.
This time I go to Sai Gon with my passionate heart and beautiful dream. I put my target is taking the certification of toeic 600 [...] I usually want to find a good job to change my life
I don't want to be a poor person in the future. I had lived in Sai Gon for 4 years and Sai Gon had taken my younger,my health,my love, my care of my Parents [i can't guess what you want to express, could you make it clearer by giving me Vietnamese meaning?], now I return Sai Gon, I want to get a good job, a beautiful life ,I hope I can be successfull as soon as I come back to Sai Gon, please give me a chance to change my life
My Parents, I love you so much but I must leave you ,please pray for me and forgive me when I can't take care of you
Good bye all of you
(if I make any mistakes, please correct for me, thank all of you)