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I total agree with your opinions. I'm in the first case now. Sometime i feel very tied and stress many things around me. I want to go out my status but it's really difficultly. All of things i need now is that i can speak E well and i find a job quikly. I tried my best  but E is a abstacle. What must will i do?

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Thank for your invite. I live in HCM now. I'm very sorry. 

i'm living tphcm.too

Firstly, staying alone has many disadvantages. None to talk and abvious (I have not catched your idea in using this word, however, if you really use this work in adjective form, there exists a grammal mistake here because you are using parallel conjunction "and") , we stay alone in a quite atmosphere, which we are (I think you should not use passive voice here because the word "boring" was applied) easily became boring by. Beside, the same situations repeat (you should use PP of the word "repeat" --> repeated because if you use repeat, a grammal mistake was found here) many times can adverse effect to us, for example it can make us be passive, lost self-confidence or stress. The research show(s) that people who offen stay alone at home have more risky in problem mental  (mental problem ) such as stress, retarted, etc than (a) normal one. But, it is undenied that with high technology, we are also easily satisfied by many (the variety of : reduce to use "many" too times) way such as (like) listening to music from internet, watching television, seeing movies, or cooking. In addition we can spend spare and privacy (should use 'rest and leisure') time to study, work or excercise, we can easily concentrate on them and get higher perpormance.

Secondly, there are many benefits of (from) going out. There are many (a lot of) activities outside, which are very useful for us such as (reduce to use such as so much. besides, in the case, you use such as is not correct because such as + N. why you do not use " for instance" for replacement) we can meet friends and to talk (here is mistake. you should not follow to vietnamese's speaking way") , share stories, exchange experiences or study together, which are help us to maintain and devolop relationship (between one and another) one another. Moreover, we can go to cinema to see new films or choose a concert to listen to music, even go to a cofee shop to drink a cup of coffee, which help you to relax and improve spirit. By contrast, we also see that, (the) outside environment is not always conducive to our activities. For exam, with many evils social, if we have not enoung (enough) confidence or experience, we are easily  attracted. As a result that we are adverse (adversely) impacted.

In conclusion, staying alone or going out have many (both) advantages and disadvates. It is true that we need  be (to) overcome them by more confidence and positive attitude (either more confidence or positive attitude)

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