letronglinh
transportation
Now, it is very hard to imagine that our life without transportation, ofcourse we can not have the same situation is now. Following is my opinion expressing about important of transportation
First, transportation plays an important role in a country development. There is saying "Transportation is as blood of body". Thanks to transportation, all proccesses can work well . Products from factories can be transported to buyer, which not only brings benefits to consumers but also promotes produce. More and more foreign companies come vn and invest big planes is a result of developing of transpotaion, which are not only chances/ opportunities but also chalenges for us. But I always believe that I can overcome all abstancles with my confident and belief.
Second, another benefit of transportation is helping people can do many things they want. Nowaday, with many diffirent kinds of vehicles, we can easily travel or take a journey to discover many things in many far away places in the world. We even can make our dream come true such as go study overseas, or do foreign business with foreign partners.
Lastly, beside many positive faces, transportation still have many nagative troubles. With huge money which invests into facilities is easily attracting people, consequenly they will do many bad things. They can corrupt or bribe, which is adverse effect on ecomomic and infact, more and more criminals relate to corroption nowaday.
In sum, we can see clearly role of transportation in our life which is irreplaceable to maintain and conducive to develop economic. But we are also warning that transportation is facing many negative problems.
ngo van dinh
Lee Rain
Blue MemberYour topic is very interesting. You use a quite wide range of structures.
However, you should consider the grammar for complex sentences such as "More and more foreign companies come vn and invest big planes is a result of developing of transpotaion, which are not only chances/ opportunities but also chalenges for us".
Here is my revived version from yours
Now, it is very hard to imagine that our life without transportation, of course we can not have the same situation is now. Following is my opinion expressing about the importance of transportation.
First, transportation plays an important role in a country development. There is a saying "transportation is as blood of body". Thanks to transportation, all processes can work well. Products from factories can be transported to buyers. It not only benefits consumers but also promotes production. That more and more foreign companies come Vietnam and build up many big projects is a result of developing of transportation. It also brings us challenges. But I always believe that we can overcome all obstacles (I think you should cross this out for it contrast the meaning of the before text)
Second, another benefit of transportation is helping people do many things they want. Nowadays, with many different kinds of vehicles, we can easily travel or take a journey to discover many things in many places in the world. We even can make our dream come true such as going study overseas, or doing business with foreign partners.
Lastly, beside many positive, transportation still brings many negative effects. Huge amount money investing into facilities is easily attracting people; consequently they will do many bad things. They can corrupt or bribe, which is adverse effect on economic and in fact, more and more criminals relate to corruption nowadays.
To sum up, we can see clearly role of transportation in our life which is irreplaceable to maintain and conducive to develop economic. But we are also warning that transportation is facing many problems.