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Day after day, time after time, people need to know how to use time reasonably .So, when do you start a day's work reasonably ? Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work while others perfer to get up later in day and work until late at night. I think we should start a day's work in the morning, we have to get up early and I always get up early in the morning since I realized that getting up early can benefit both my physical and health and also can make my time more.
Everyday,in the morning, air is fresh and peaceful, the cool temperature and morning sunshine, that is why many people always want to walk or do exercise in the morning. If I get up early, my mood is good ,I feel full of vitality, I can breathe fresh air , get the early rays of sunshine, and I can see dawn. This thing is good for your skin because the early rays of sunshine has vitamin E and I can see the most beautiful scene in a day . Conversely, if I wake up late , I feel tired and I still want to sleep more. This thing makes me not do anything else on that whole day.
Moreover , I have time to do things that I like, for example, I can walk or I can cook my breakfast for my family ... Specialy, I can go to work earlier than others and I wouldn't stuck in traffic. . On the other hand, people who get up late have to spend more time on the road, this thing makes you feel uncomfortable and your mood is bad . Your work day isn't not effective and you won't go to work on time.
Finally , People always say that: "An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening" .When getting up early, I have longer time during the day to do many activities. I can start and finish my work before those who stay on their bed until late morning. So in the evening , I can play with my friends and watch my favorite TV programs . If you get up late , you have to work until late at night . In fact , working in the evening is very tired , you feel sleeply. This thing can make you not to finish your work on time. It has a huge impact on your work.
In conclusion, I can maintain my good health, moderate my temperament and make the most of my time sounds better . Consequently, it is necessary to get up and then begin new day in the early morning
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Phổ thôngIn my opinion, your grammar is good. I only find 1 issue about the first sentence in the second paragraph. I think it should be "Everyday, the air is fresh and peaceful in the morning. The temperature is cool and you can feel the morning sunshine. That's why....."
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