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Hi Duyen,

I have just revised some typing mistakes. Read it again.

English subject is helpful for me to enjoy my life. I always feel excited when I learn it. Because I know English is important key to success. English is useful for my work. Nowadays, there are many International Trading companies and more foreign companies invest in Viet Nam. As you know, English seems all the people in the world have agreed to use to talk to each other. So if I speak English fluently, I can get my dream job and earn more money. I can communicate or contact with foreigners who give a good chance and good work for me. In addition, with my good English I hope I can solidate my work position in my company and I have many chances to go abroad on business. Having a interesting point, English help me access many entertainment channels. English is the main language of the internet, so If my English is good, I can surf the internet easily. When I know English, everything seems to be more simple, I will understand more different cultures of the world through watching TV on many international channels or watch movies without subtitle. Also I can listen a lot of English songs and I feel this song is much better when I can understand the words. Everything becomes more wonderful when I can read famous books which were written in English such as: "Gone With The Wind", "The Thorn Birds", "Nobody's Boy", "The Call of the Wild"..... Since I learnt English, my life has changed and my lifestyle has become more wonderful and perfect.

Thanks Miss Nhung for your feedback.I read paragraph one more and  I have just seen one more mistake. I will correct.

English subject is helpful for me to enjoy my life. I always feel excited when I learn it. Because I know English is important key to success. English is useful for my work. Nowadays, there are many International Trading companies and more foreign companies invest in Viet Nam. As you know, English seems all the people in the world have agreed to use to talk to each other. So if I speak English fluently, I can get my dream job and earn more money. I can communicate or contact with foreigners who give a good chance and good work for me. In addition, with my good English I hope I can solidate my work position in my company and I have many chances to go abroad on business. Having a interesting point, English help me access many entertainment channels. English is the main language of the internet, so If my English is good, I can surf the internet easily. When I know English, everything seems to be more simple, I will understand more different cultures of the world through watching TV on many international channels or watch watching movies without subtitle. Also I can listen a lot of English songs and I feel this song is much better when I can understand the words. Everything becomes more wonderful when I can read famous books which were written in English such as: "Gone With The Wind", "The Thorn Birds", "Nobody's Boy", "The Call of the Wild"..... Since I learnt English, my life has changed and my lifestyle has become more wonderful and perfect.

How do u feel my paragraph? I wrote it depend on us outline. And we have a paragraph about description a famous person but I can't idea, and I'm so lazy. :D. if you have any idea, you can write it, and then you post it. Evreyone can give u feedback :)

i agree with your opinions and i image about your writen.

English subject is helpful for me to enjoy my life. I always feel excited when I learn it. Because I know English is important key to success. English is useful for my work. Nowadays, many companies trade international(ly). Beside(s), more and more foreign companies invest in Viet Nam. As you know, English seems all the people in the world seem to use English to hace agreed to use to talk to each other. So if I speak English fluently, I can get my dream job and earn more money. I can communicate or contact with foriegners (foreigners) who give a good chance(s) and good work for me. In addition, with my good English I hope I can solidate my work position in my company and I have many chances to go abroad on business. Having a (an) The interesting point is that English help me access many entertainment channels. English is the main language of (on) the internet, so If my English is good, I can surf the internet easily. When I know English, everything seems to be more simple, I will understand more cultures of the world differently through watch(ing) TV on many international channels or watch movies without subtitle(s). Also I can listen (to) a lot of English songs and I feel this song is them much better since when I can understand the words. Everything becomes more wonderful when I can read famous book(s) which (were) was written in English such as: "Gone With The Wind", "The Thorn Birds", "Nobody's Boy", "The Call of the Wild"..... Since I learnt English, my life has (been) changed and my lifestyle has become more wonderful and perfect.

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