Introduce myselft.
Hello everyone !
My name is phuong . I'm a freshman at University of social science and humanities at HCM city.Now, I'm 19 years old .I'm from Lam dong province, which has Da lat city ,a beautiful and dreaming city . Some months ago when I began to lived far from family, I gradually recognized that too hard to live alone in a big city like Sai gon. I have to do everything without any helping of my mother such as : cooked, washed and so on . I missed my family too much . But now ,I'm familiar with the life of student live far from home . It's can say that I haved grown up too much . In summer vacation , I'll be out off school about a month, i'll go home. I'm really expected that month when I'll return to my home.But now, I have to study hard to pass my two exam semester. I'll try my best and I want to I'll say to everyone that : " I did it ! ".
thanks for reading it . I know my post is not perfect , it has many mistakes . So, Will you please show it up for me that i can improve my writing skill.
Thank alot ! And Have a nice day !

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Hello everyone !
My name is phuong . Now, i study at the University of social science and humanities in HCM city. I'm 19 years old .I'm from Da lat city, it 's a beautiful city . A few months ago when I decided to be away from my family/hometown, I gradually recognized that it's too hard to live alone in a big city like Sai gon. I have to do so many things without any supports from my parents such as : cooking, washing and so on . Early/at first, I truly missed my family . However, now ,I'm familiar with the new life . It means that I had grown up so much . In this summer , I'll be out off school For a month, i'll decide to go home. I expect it eagerly that i can come back to my home as soon as possible .Nevertheless, before doing that, I need to try my best for passing any examinations .
In short, that's all about myself.
Thanks for your attentions . I know that my writing skill is not perfect and it has many mistakes . As a result, please help me to correct this essay.