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A sad story.
Please, you try to live well.

lỗi nè:

1.use to cry --->used to cry(mấy câu sau cũng sai tương tự nhé

2. was  child-----> was a child 

3. it is funny------> is it funny

4 to resolved-------> to resolve

5. i dependent-------> i depend

6.a pillars---------> a pillar

7.i'm a happiest unless one day--------> i was a happiest man till one day

8. mấy câu sau đó là kể về quá khứ thì dùng thì quá khứ

^^ góp ý tí nhé!

hi thak ban ngo thanh tung nhe ^^

thak ban Khanh :)

BE STRONGER...!!!!!

1/ I use to cry when i was child and i know every body too..--> When I was a child, I cried as every child in the world.

2/ But i alway feel i'm still child although i'm 21 year old.---> I always feel that I am as a child although I am a 21 year-old girl.

3/ It's funny?----> It is funny./Is it funny?

4/ sometime i feel shame by myself because i rarely help my parent to resolved some problems.-----> Sometime I feel too bad because I am not a person who is  not willing to help my parents when they really need my helps.

5/ I dependent on my father, he is a pillars in my family.----> My father is a pillar of my family, of course , I live on him too.

 6/ I only study and try to best for study don't worry about anything--->I have to do nothing but studying.

7/ I use to think i'm a happiest unless one day--> I thought I am the happinest girl in the world.

8/ My dad was died, everything seems meaningless for me.My life become to bad, i don't care another things and i like to drop deep---> Until one day, everything collaped in front of me, that was day my father passed away. That period was the worst time in my life. I felf that my life was not worth to live, I was in deeply despresed situation .

9/ Untill i looked back my mom is here always beside me, my friends don't leave me alone only me tormeted myself and i know what i done.--->One day, one day again, when I watched my mother while she was cooking, I realized that my life was worth to live because I still have my mother, even more i have my friends. I thought by myself that it was time for "chin up".

10/ No longer the fulcrum doesn't mean that i give up.Maybe my dad didn't want to see me as this.I will be strong and try to hard in oder to help my mom.Nothing is impossiple so let's be more matune myself! -->With all my effort to make our life getting better. I am proud of myself, my mother proud of me . I beleave that in the golden stream, my father also proud of me too.

thank aroma taicher so much :)

and thank Lucky me too