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các bạn giúp mình sửa bài này với. thank u so much.
Learn english.
Why do need to learn english???.
Nowadays, english is popular in more than 100 countries and ove 1.5 billion people in the world can speak english, so it has become global language.
The first, english is very interesting, it makes who studing feel fun and attracts attention of people in the lesson.The english helps people can talk to true emotions with other people.
The second, the english is also very useful, if u speak english well, you will have a lot of opportunities to get a good job from foreign company, so you can earn a lot of money.You are able to communicate and make friends with everybody, you can learn abuot their life and cultures. It's help you access to almost all knowledge in the world. You also can watch many famous films of Hollywood which are produce by english. Besides, the application of most computer and other equipment are in english, so you will use them more easilly.
In addition to the benefits above, the english also have difficult as speak, pronounce and so hard to remember new vocabulary, grammer.So you want to learn english, you need to patient, hard studing.I think you will like to study english.
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Phổ thôngLearn english.
Why do you need to learn English???.
Nowadays, English is popular in more than 100 countries and over 1.5 billion people in the world can speak English, so it has become a global language.
First of all, English is very interesting, it makes people who study feel fun and it also attracts attention of people in the lesson.English can help people talk with true emotions to other people.
Second, the english is also very useful, if you speak English well, you will have a lot of opportunities to get a well-paid job in foreign companies, so you can earn a lot. You will be able to communicate and make friends with everybody in the world, you can learn about their lifes and cultures. It will help you access to almost all knowledge in the world. You can also watch many famous films of Hollywood which are produced by English people. Besides, the applications on most computers and other equipments are in English, so you can use them more easilly.
In addition to the benefits above, English also have difficulties in speaking, pronounciation and it is very hard to remember new vocabularies, grammars.So if you want to learn english, you need to be patient and hard-working .I think you will love to study English.
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