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Leisure is a growing industry, but people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,as you know, technology is popular,important and becomes a part of our life. There are many modern technologies such as: computer, ipod, television,... We can use them for different entertaining purposes. Of course, leisure is a growing industry. But now people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to because the use of modern technology has made them less creative.. I don't deny that the development of technology makes us creative. but I agree on this statement because of the following reasons.

First of all, with its development,technology has a lot of advantages but it also has some disadvantages. One of them is made the people less crative. For example, in the past, when people had free time and felt boring because they didn't have anything to do. They would think something to do such as reading books, going out, shopping or playing sports. I think these activities would make them be active and have a good spirit to work. But now, people no longer entertain themselves as much as they used to. When they are on leisure time, they always playing computer,chatting or watching television. Let us take children is an example. Today,the parents pamper their children so much. They buy and allow your children to use computer to play games when the children are young. As a result,the children are very interested in these games and even they addicted to the games, According to the psychologists, being attracted to high-tech equipments is one of the reasons for higher risk of suffering autism in children. It makes them be limited in communicating with people and be introverted in their narrow world.Therefore, it apparently seems that the importance for parents to teach their children how to make good use of computers.

Secondly,we can 't deny that the development of human is thank to modern technology, but this development also makes ​​people become more separated, more lazy and stupid. When having problems, some people always search its internet instead of thinking how to solve it. For example, a student who has a trouble in studying chemistry searches internet the answer of his homework and copies. For another instance, no one else, I am an example. Own to using calculator, I entirely depend on its. As a result, I become less creative.

In conclusion, technology is very useful and has many advantages. But I think we shouldn't relies on its too much. When having free time,we should taking part in physical activities so as to have a good body and become more intelligent and creative.