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Đề bài là :
Some working parents believe childcare centres can provide best care for children, others think other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Bài làm của mình :
It is true that the parents often wonder whether they ought to provide children with care of daycare centers or not. While many people suppose that children receiving cares from their family members can be the best way to care for children, I would argue that institutional cares are much better.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why the parents have a tendency of choosing home-based care. Firstly, they may think that caring for youngsters in home satisfies the condition that is safe for their children. Those who can be grandparents receiving the responsibility of paying attention to children is likely to spend plenty of time for them. By this way, grandparents take care of all children's activities, which would lead to be less injuries or accident. Furthermore, children could easy to make close relationship with people who are member in their family. If individuals do not belong to their family, the young are probably unconfident, even scared.
On the other hand, I believe that the young are under the care of care services is beneficial in some ways. One major advantage is that they often live in educated environment. This is because childcare centers usually hire skilled staffs who have abilities and skills enough to foster them. Another benefit is that children can be nurtured essential skills . Those centers often have sufficient facilities to provide them full of activities such as art, reading and plays. This allows children push their imagination and learn vital skills such as collaborative and self-discipline skills.
In conclusion, although both nurturing youngsters in home and taking them to daycare centers are advantageous in their own ways, it seems to me that it is better to take care of children in daycare centers.
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