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Go To Truong Sa
My parents always asked me what I would do after graduate. Many times I said that I didn't know. But now, if my parents ask me again, I will answer that I will become an English teacher and want to go to Truong Sa archipelago. Some people may think I'm crazy. But I don't think so. Why I can not go to Truong Sa while many school there are lacking of teacher, children need to study like the others in the mainland, and I want to contribute something to our education.
One of the place is lacking of teacher is Truong sa. Truong Sa is far from the mainland, so that there are many students after graduate don't want to go there to work. Most of the teacher go to Truong Sa are compelled. It's easy to see that many people here don't have job. Because they just want to choose the light work, get a lot of money, and don't want to go away from their family. So that the archipelago is lacked of teacher and the mainland don't have enough job for everyone. Truong Sa belongs to Vietnam and I'm Vietnamese, I think I should do the right thing like go there to work.
Children in the mainland and in the archipelago should be cheated equally. The social is more and more develop, so education is one of the important things to make it better. Children are born have the same statue, everyone need to educated. Some parents in the difficult place or in the archipelago maybe don't care about educating of their children, while the youth are the important factor of the countries. So that we should give them a good condition to educate. I will teach them with all of my enthusiasm.
What would you do if your parents asked you to become a teacher? Most of people think that teacher is poor, so they will choose another career in stead of teaching. But I think that teacher is a good job for me. I can contribute my knowledge and ability to our education. Some people become teacher just because their obligation, they do something like machine, they go to school, say some lessons, and go home on time. But they don't care what students get after that. It will make pupils worse. I think I will do it better than them, I will try to develop our education with all things I can.
Everyone has a choice for themselves and I also have the option for my future. Maybe I can't have a good life with a lot of money like them, but with my job, I can help children, help our education, make my parents pride of me, I will happier than them.
Ẩn Lê
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Phổ thôngTớ thì ko đủ khả năng đánh giá bài viết của bạn đúng sai về mặt ngữ pháp,nhưng tớ hiểu nôm na rằng bạn muốn trở thành một "teacher" để góp phần truyền đạt kiến thức cho các em học sinh trên biển đảo Trường Sa,nơi mà đang rất còn thiếu giáo viên,vì nói theo bạn là phần lớn giáo viên đến đây là do bị ép buộc chứ ít ai muốn dấn thân phụng sự việc giáo dục bởi ai cũng muốn chọn cho mình một nghề sáng sủa hơn trên đất liền. Tớ tin điều bạn nói là có thật và cũng là điều trăn trở với những ai có tâm với nền giáo dục nước nhà,đặc biệt là những vùng sâu vùng xa v.v..
Hy vọng ý nghĩa nội dung bài viết của bạn sẽ trở thành lý tưởng sống của bạn sau này nhé,
Chúc bạn biến ước mơ "khó khăn vất vả ấy" thành hiện thực !