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Topic: Family
DECRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH
My father is the best man I had ever seen. He is 50 years old, he is the head and shoulder in my family. My father is a good hearted person. He always helps everybody who needs him, when he sees a boy fall down he try to make him stop crying. My father always smiles and seems no matter can break him down. Even though what happened with him or my family, he is really calm down and find the best ways to get over it. My father is my first teacher who teaches me lots of good things. He teaches me many things in life about dream, lives, love and how to be a good person. With me, my father is the biggest man forever and forever.
EXAMPLE PARAGRAPH
My family is a modern and open family. In my family, children can do everything if it is not exaggerated. For example, we can control our life, my parents just give the advices and tell the best ways we should choose. My sister and I can hair dying or wearing any clothes we like. For example, when I have red hair my mother says it makes my face bright and beautiful. In my family, my parents always ask and hear my opinion about family's problems. For example, when we want to decorate our house, my parents ask what favorite color I like and let me choose it. My family is not a traditional family; it is type of modern family which we are fair.
PROCESS PARAGRAPH
It is easy to have a good dinner which is delicious and tasty for family. If you want to make a special meal, do not forget stew meat. Before cooking, you need to have meat, eggs, coconut, fish sauce, sugar, pepper and onions. First, marinate meat for at least 30 minutes to 1 hour with fish sauce, sugar, salt and pepper, onion, garlic. Second, stir meat and put coconut oil into until flooded. Turn the flame big when you see it boil, meat and coconut oil turn yellow-brown. Then, put eggs in and mix with meat, not to cover during cooking. Finally, taste for eating and put meat on a beautiful dish. With some simple steps, you can cook a delicious meal for all members of family.
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