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i had an unforgetable .it two week ago.It was Huyen's18th birthday party.i was very happy to be invited.I gave her a birthday card, a notebook .certainly,she happily opened them.I came to the party with her friends of course ,they also are mine.The party was held at Huyen's home and started at 6pm.Although it wasn't very big,we were please.There was a lot of food and drinks such as cakes,candies,water melon,soda....The party had lots of ballons with different colours.Then I ate some candies and drank soda.Music was very great.We sang "Happy Birthday" to give her for that birthday.Next,our friends were dancing while I was talking to some new friends.People were very fun and friendly.Finally,at over ten ,the party came to an end.i hugged Huyen and said "Good bye" with everyone .I went home feeling that it had been a glad evening.
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Phổ thôngI had an unforgetable (time/day/event) . It was two week ago. It was Huyen's 18th birthday party. I was very happy to be invited. I gave her a birthday card, a notebook . Certainly, she happily opened them. I came to the party with her friends, who are also mine of course. The party was held at Huyen's home and started at 6pm. Although it wasn't very big ,we were pleased.There were a lot of food and drinks such as cakes, candies, water melon, soda.... The party had lots of balloons in different colours.Then I ate some candies and drank soda. The music was very great. We sang "Happy Birthday" to give her for that birthday. Next, our friends were dancing while I was talking to some new friends. People were very funny (?) and friendly. Finally, at over ten past , the party came to an end. I hugged Huyen and said "Good bye" to everyone . I went home feeling that it had been a glad happy evening.
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