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Advantages and disadvantages when living in abroad
There are many advantages and disadvantages of living in Viet Nam and living in abroad.
The first, living in abroad improves us many language skills, such as listening, reading, speaking and writing. In fact, people, who lived in abroad have had a lot of confidences in dealing and working with foreign persons. In addition to, hight educational environment is the most attractive thing with us, which provides great opportunities for advanced techniques and sciences, learn modern lectures of many best professor in the world and have chances to find a good job. Living in abroad help us not only make new friends from different countries but also learn many foreign cultures.
However, when we live in foreign countries, we don't have much supports from family and friends because of far-away distances and different time. In Viet Nam, we can do it in any time and by any way. Specially, we may be have to face to racism which have never occurred in Viet Nam. Beside that, there are many different routine between living in Viet Nam and living in abroad such as different foods, transportation and opposite weather.
In brief, with those advantages and disadvantages, we can think to chose living in abroad or living in Viet Nam.
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Mèo Bông
Phổ thôngỞ phần MB, bạn đừng nên dùng lại các từ ngữ đã được viết ở đề, như vậy sẽ mất điểm, theo kinh nghiệm của mình. Thay vào đó bạn có thể dùng benefit thay cho advantage và drawback thay cho disadvantage chẳng hạn. Ở TB bạn bị 1 số lỗi về chính tả, thì và ngữ pháp. Mình không giỏi lắm nên không dám sửa lung tung cho bạn :(