can you help me correct it ?
TOPIC 2 : TRAVELING
In your holiday, What are you going to do ? I am going to travel . It is my favorite .Last month , I and my sister visted singapore , one of the most famous cities in Asia . Singapore , a small island , lies at the southern of Malaisia . The city of Singapore is very beautiful . It is well-known for its centers of bussies and other activities . Every day , Iwent out with my sister to see the beautiful and interesting places in the city .First day , I went to Tiger Balm garden , there were several statues of people , animals . We spent hlf of the day at this place .Next day , We visited the museum where Isaw a lot of precious things , I took a lot of photos .Then, every night , I went round the town and visited some parks , some cinemas . I enjoyed every moment of this city .I want to come back there again !I 'll earn a lot of money to pay ticket . :)
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- lies at the southern of malaisia=> it's in the southern of malaisia
-we spent half- day on this place