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I was borned in a poor family, where has 5 children. My parents are farmers. I had a very unpeaceful childhood. My father is a hardworking man but he like drinking wine. It was the reason making us so sad. He drank so much that he talked and talked about everything with unpolite words. Sometimes he hit his wife and children. Until now sometimes he still drinks and talks but less. But I know, I know the reason why he did that. With a difficult life, he has to work very hard to earn enough money for 5 children going to school. At this age, other people often relax with family but my father still has to work, still takes care of his son and daughter, he has not had relax yet. Men are not able to stand as well as women are so when they get angry, they often talk comfortablely. I know that so I have never blamed him. In my mind, I think he's the best father in the world and I want to say that: 'I love you, Daddy"

thank you for your suggestion.but why did you use' has not had relax'?

sorry for that:

has not relaxed yet

I don't understand why in the first sentence you write "where" not which.I think you should use addicted wine or is a alcoholic instead of "like drinking wine".because it's too light inn this context."unpolite" is false.It 's impolite.

impotile words not unpolite words.

ok we can use in which or where, it's all the same.

can i use ' to more comfortable', ok?

yep.

Impolite words