HELP ME CORRECT IT
Watchhing film is my favorite . I usually watch TV in my free time . there are many kind of movies such as : romantic film , horror film , funny film . i like watching funny film . My best favorite film is home alone . the main charactor is Kevin , 8 years old , who is mischievous boy . In his family 's holiday , all members woke up so rush to prepare , so they forgot Kevin .Kevin stayed home alone and so happy to do anything he want . After a few day , he missed his family and at that time , he must face up with dangerous thing . There were two thieves entered his house . But with his clever , he caught them . I is real funny . After all ,Kevin see that family is important to him , he needs them a lots .Though this movie , I feel I should take care and love each of member of my family more . . . this movie is meaningfull with me . I like it very much .
Lê Thị Kim Tuyến
Blue MemberTheo mình:
Sau kind of, khi sử dụng danh từ số nhiều thì dùng kinds of, dt số ít mới dùng kind of.
"Dangerous thing"=> dangerous things.
" Entered"=> entering, bởi vì một câu chỉ có một động từ, nếu 1 câu có 2 thì đó là mệnh đề quan hệ, dạng bạn đang sử dụng là rút ngắn mdqh, và nó ở dạng chủ động nữa.
"see"=> recognize, "them"=> it vì family k fai là danh từ số nhiều.
đây là suy nghĩ của mình, bạn tham khảo thêm ý kiến nha^^