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Topic: Taking school instead of the primary job
Have we ever heard this saying "the ball is in your court". It means the next decision or action is up to us. There are a lot of options which need to get a suitable choice such as learning at school and taking from a primary job. Some person chooses learning school because of knowledge. Others get some low-paid jobs because of money. Which one is better? The purpose of essay demonstrates the difference between them to help us have a good determination.
A significant difference is the investment. As we know, learning schools requires much money. For example, we have to pay money for tuition, books, clothes and facilities so that we exchange knowledge in class. In addition, we have to work hard to get good results. We take part in many activities such as work in groups, work with individuals and work by themselves. Also, we participate in volunteer activities to develop social skills which are necessary for us after graduating school. Unlike learning school, we may join a primary job without diploma, so we don't need to spend a lot of money and energy for it. Furthermore, we get job and income without waiting for long time. Learning school and taking early job require the different investment; therefore, they will give us diverse results.
Moreover, other difference is the background knowledge. People taking school have many skills, knowledge, experience and relationships to help them get a job easily. Therefore, we always pretend to be a knowledgeable person who has motivation to strive for in life, face to face with difficulties and avoid with traps and temptations. Unlike knowledgeable person, people taking the early job usually get mistakes more. I realized that the normal people often get mistakes before important determination. In contract, they have strong heath to take care of their family and do housework. Although they have different background knowledge, their daily life is essentially the same.
All in all, the option between learning school and primary job depend on each person. However, we have to base on its investment and the background knowledge so that we get a suitable choice. They both is good to lead us to successful way.
chiến phong aragon
Phổ thôngchooses learning school mình nghĩ là chooses to learn in school hihi
the differences
get mistakes minh nghi la make mistakes before important decisions hay hon
In contract, cos phai contrast ko
is essentially the same, minh ko hieu sao cho nay tu nhien dung trang tu is essential la duoc chu nhi
bai van cua ban hay lam, vi du minh hoa ro rang, lien ket doc cung hieu duoc.
minh khong co kha nang nen minh ko chua cho ban duoc.
chuc ban co 1 bai essay hoan chinh hon