How The Important Of Money ?

phamlekimnguyen - 07/04/2012 21:06

How The Important Of Money ?

day chi la nhung dieu ma minh hoc dc trong cuoc song ma thoi , nhung dieu do minh hoc tu thay co , ban be do

this is my opinions i was studied in life . It's just have a little but i want to share with all people . Everything i want to say that money need for life but not the thing most important . it's make the life is better but it's can buy health , happy... So don't think money can buy everything and that is just my understanding

trinh do tieng anh cua minh ko dc tot lam , minh mong cac ban doc qua roi cho minh bik y kien nha

thanks a lot

phamlekimnguyen - 07/04/2012 21:30

minh xin loi nha , minh nham phan nay nek : it's can't buy .... ko fai la it's can buy dau nha . sorry cac ban rat nhieu

Nguyen Van Thien - 07/04/2012 21:42

there are a lot of mistakes that it's: "the thing most important---the most important thing" , " it's can---It can"...

trying !

Nguyen Van Thien - 07/04/2012 21:44

there are a lot of mistakes that they're: "the thing most important---the most important thing" , " it's can---It can"...

trying !

Zaccheus - 08/04/2012 17:29

learn how to make a correct sentence in simple present tense before writing anything. "it's just have", "it's make" those things make me confused.

Nguyen Van - 09/04/2012 20:41

i can rewrite your pargraph below, but i think i still keep your original paragrah...

This is my opinion that I studied through my life. It do not have too much, but i still want to share with everybody. Everything that I want to say is money. We all need money for our life, but it is not the most important thing. It makes our life better, but it can not buy health or happiness. Therefore, we should not think that money can buy everything, and that is my understanding of money.

Athough i think it is not aperfect one, i hope that it can help you improve your grammar day by day :)

By the way, i think everybody should find down the mistakes that you think she's wrong to help her study better, do not comment her in those way. thanks

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