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my name 's panda. iam a student in acedamicof public administration. iam 20 years old.  now, i live in distric 10, hcm city. iam very romantic. i lke to watch korea film. but i know it is not the truth but my life is very sad so i want to dream. i am a unlucky person in evrything. so iam so insecure. and i have a few friends so i want to make friend with evryone. i hope evry want to make friend with me. thank you for listening my introduce. bye bye evrybody

Hello everybody ! My name is Huy. I am 22 years old. I come from Ho Chi Minh city and I study at VL University. My faculty is IT. I want to be a good software engineer, therefore, I decided(made up my mind) to learn more about programming, soft skills and english. My English isn't good but I wanna try all my best to improve my english skills, especially in  Listening and Speaking. Now, I am in my third year at the university and there is only one year left till I graduate.

Let me tell you about my family,which has 4 people / members: my father, my mother, my younger brother and me. Actually, I still have a grandmother, uncles and aunts,... but they live far away from my house. My father, a 50-year-old man, is a shopkeeper. He is very strict and a bit rude but he always care about all the family members. My mother is 48 years old. She is so kind, careful and good at cooking. My little brother is 18 years old, he studys very hard and dreams of becoming a doctor. This dream seems hard for him to reach but I sure he can do it. 

good luck! 

I'm not good at English, too. But I think that there are some mistakes in your essay. 

Examples:

"I am 22 years old". The same "He is 50 years old" not" He is 50 year old".

"I will be happy" not "I will happy".

"He dream of being a doctor" or "He has a dream of being a doctor" not " his dream of being a doctor".

"Let me tell you about my family, there are 4 peoples in my family: my family, my mother, my younger brother and I."

 In my opinion, you should write "thanks for reading" instead of "thank for your reading".

Thk everyone, I'll notice these mistakes.

Thanks and regards.

@Thanh Nhan: "Studies" not "studys" ^^

hey, if you use noun as "studies" , "he" have to be changed into "his studies" + verb . In my sentence, "he studys" followed the structure S+V . 

@Thanh Nhan: oh I see! I don't know that before ^^

@Thanh Nhan: Please explain more details. Some friends of mine said that I should use "studies" instead of "studys". Additionally, when I translate "studys" into Vietnamese It doesn't have any meaning.

Never mind, my mistakes haha. ok thanks 

@Thanh Nhan: ^^ Don't mention it.

You're great, I think i have to learn from you more. Make a friends with me and let's practise together, ok?