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"So , I love this lace so much."---->place!

nice to see you!

I am not sure, but I think that it should be corrected  "three times a week" by "thrice a week", right or not? hihi, I like studying E but so bad.

@ Đinh Công Minh : thanks a lot!
@ Đặng Huy Khánh : I'm not sure , too . I'll review it . We'll try to study English together. Do you agree with me? 

Hi everyone! My name's Thanh Tâm . I'm 24 years old. I was born and grown up in SaiGon. So , I love this place so much. I'm working as an accountant in Valspar Paint Group. I'm studying English at (an) evening class.My English is very bad.So I'll try my best to improve it.
My hobbies are reading , chatting and watching movies. My favorite sport is swimming. I usually go to a swimming pool three times a week. And I like drinking coffee very much. So , I often go to coffee shop with my friends every weekend.
Everyone says that I'm a friendly person. I think so. I enjoy making friends with people who are easy-going . You can contact me if you want . I'll be glad to go that (ý nghĩa của cụm này là sao hả bạn?), too.

P/S : I hope everybody 'll read and correct my mistake . Have a night day!

So, love this...

"so" nen thay bang "therefore"

hoac dung "so "thi dung co dung dau cham truoc tu "so"

minh sua lai nhu the nay:

I was born and grown up in Saigon, so i love this place so much

hoac:I was born and grown up in Saigon.Therefore, I love this place so much

bạn dùng nhiều câu đơn quá

như vậy làm cho bài văn không được hay và mạch lạc

nên viết với nhau bằng từ nối sẽ hay hơn

Not bad!But it is not very well !!!

@ Nguyễn Văn Hải : Mình viết sai , do that mà mình ghi go that.
@ doan thi tuong vi : lần sau mình sẽ dùng nhiều từ nối hơn . cám ơn bạn đã góp ý .
@  DRACULOSSCQEALONG.... : I'll try . Thanks you

Hello everybody!.My name's Thanh Tam,I'm 24 years old.I was born and growing up in Ho Chi Minh City so I loved this place very much.I'm working for the Valspar Paint Group as an accountant,I'm taking one English course at one class in the evening.My English's still so bad,so I hope I'll have the chance and try all my very best of efforts to improve it.

My hobbies are reading ,having chats to everyone,watching movies.My favourite sport is swimming. I usually go to the swimming pool for 3 times in each week,I love drinking coffee so much so I often enjoy my free time with my friends in the coffee shop everytime in the weekend. People often say that I'm a friendly person,I think it's really that.I love to make friends with everybody,who're kind also easy-going.You can contact me to make friend if you like,I'll be glad to be going on for that too.

P.S : I hope you all here will read my task and be willing to help me check and correct my whole all the mistakes.

Thank you very much and Have a nice day !.

sao lai la "growing up" ha ban?

sao "love" lai chia la "loved" bay gio va sau nay van con yeu ma phai chia la i've loved ...

"my English's" sua lai la "my English"

chi can dung "try my best" la duoc roi khong can dung dai dong nhu vay dau ban.

"chatting" cung duoc ma ban

da dung"my free time" roi, thi khong can dung"everytime" nua

tai sao lai la Ho Chi Minh nhi?

ko phai la Hochiminh ah?

to ko phan biet dc ai giup t voi

Hochiminh la dung do

ban oi: Have a night day!(night sai rui,day la buoi toi,ban co the thay bang good or nice)

Omit your mistakes cos they just come from typing. In conclusion , an introduction passage needn't be too much flexible and complex with the complicated sentence. Học giỏi nhen :)