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Nice to read your introduce.

I'm 24 years old, i was born in Ha Tinh and grew up in Binh Duong. At the present,(at the present time/ at present) i live with my family. These (there) are six people in my family including my parents, my older brother and my niece (my granddaughter). my favourite(s)( or my hobby) is (are) swiming, walking, listening to radio (the), watching TV. reading (and reading) picture story (or cartoon?what exactly do you mean here?).
I graduated at Ho Chi Minh university of industry in july (July) 2011. My major is business administration.I  have worked at Ho chi Minh city for two years. Recently, I change (have changed) working enviroment (environment). Now, I only (am )at my home. My new job don't suitable with (for)me. I sad it, I always remember it when i have freetime. i will be careful at new (a new) company in the future. (the sentence should be changed)
In love,(about love/as to love/ with regard to love)i'm single. i trying (am trying) to find my true love. i  have a love happy.  in time that (in that time/at that time), i'm very happy. but I had been betrayed (but in the past, I had been...). i cried very much.i don't know i can love a  other person (I dont know how I can love an other man/I dont know whether/if I can love an other man)? why happen with me(why did it happen with me?). (but now)Now, i'm alright.
I hope i will success (be successful/ have successes) in the future and always happy.(be)
Thanks for all.

Thank you so much for your comments

Next time, I will trying to improve my english skill.

Thank you so much for your comment.

Next time, I will try to improve my English writing skill.

I'm 24 years old, i was born in Ha Tinh and grew up in Binh Duong. At the present, i live  ( at the present: hiện tại tiếp diễn:  i am living..)with my family. These are six people in my family including my parents, my older brother and my niece (my granddaughter). my favourite( or my hobby) is swiming, walking, listening to radio, watching TV. reading picture story.
I graduated at  ( graduated from, chứ ko at) Ho Chi Minh university of industry in july 2011. My major is business administration.I  have worked at Ho chi Minh city for two years. Recently, I change( have changed my .. vì bạ chị dùng: recently- hiện tại hoàn thành.) working enviroment. Now, I only at my home.   ( thíu tobe) My new job don't suitable    ( suitable là tính từ nên dùng tobe phí trước( is not...) , theo sau từ đó là to hoặc for chứ ko phải with)) with me. I sad it, I always remember it when i have freetime. i will be careful at new company in the future.
In love, i'm single. i trying   ( thiếu tobe)  to find my true love. i  have a love happy  ( happy love).  in time that ( in that time) i'm ( were : đang nói quá khứ) very happy. but I had been betrayed. i cried very much.i don't know( if) i can love a  other person? why happen with me. ( why did it happen to me?) Now, i'm alright. ( i am ok)
I hope i will success in the future and always happy. ( happy foreover)
Thanks for all.
Ps: Many mistake!! hehe

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