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wioth shifly eyes  cum nay nghia la gi vay ban

really ? You are beautiful ? Or you dress little cloth ?

 I think if you met situation like me    I never meet situation because i'm boy  hhehehe   

very good

i think your grammar are good. there are some misspellings

Three years ago I defeated a bad man whom  had a bad behaviour to me. That was a day I can not forget. Like most of days on weekend, (on the way school I go to in the short cut street ----> "I go to school on the way which students usually go to the school. It has a short cut street".) I think it might be secure because nothing haven't happened to me. However, one day my thoughts have changed. In the morning I went to the school at 8.am .there was no one on this street. Suddenlly, there appeared a strange man ----> a strange man appeared. He rode on a old motobike, running past me . He looked at me with shifly eyes. I began to have a dout about this man as I had heard a news from Email class." let's careful ! when you go alone. There are three bad man always intend to touch the girl". Then he rode back . This time he rode slowly on his motobike. Next, he intended to touch in my chest, but his behaviour was prevented by me. I hit his hand and shouted"  sick in the head".He was scared and rode motobike away. Finally I won  him  by my courage and calm. I think if you met situation like me, you should be calm and brave to sovle problems.

you are lucky! if you have met me,you were died 

I'm not sure abt ur English skill! Maybe I'm a bad boy. But I still understand ur story! Just wanna say something to u "Better luck next time" =]] =]]

Unbelievable!!! I mean You are a girl but you could keep calm, hit his hand and Shouted... Wow, do you know kungfu? At that time, was you afraid of anything??? 

Before that, Have you been going to your school on this way anymore?

And I have the same opinion with Nguyen Hien, If you met me, you were not lucky like that...

Hope that you never meet me..!!! :)))

oh everyone understood. As I has said on my pharagaph. My school has anounced a news. There are three bad man always intend to touch the girl. some girl was in that situation like me , but they could not defeat a bad man. They did not have courage and calm. I dont say i have kungfu. I only say that I have brave and calm  enough to sovle that situation. I wore uniform not little clothe like  Mr Phan123 said.Moreover, although I am a girl , when I am in dangerous situation, I belive myselfe will have strong enough to solve problems like the boy. Mr HIEN if you met me, you woud be defeated like that bad. I think so. I write this pharagraph because my teacher ask me " tell your experience about the things has happened in your life".  Thank everyone's comment

D: mainguyen92. THANK YOU SO MUCH. good luck to you

shifity eyes. I like this phrase!

Your pararaph is good. I have something corrected below. Good luck!

Three years ago I defeated a bad man who had a bad behavior to me. That was the day I can not forget. Like most of days on weekend, I walked on the short cut street which students usually went to the school. I thought it might be safety because there has nothing happened to me. One day, however, everything has changed in my mind. At 8am in that morning I went to the school. There was no one on that street. Suddenly, there appeared a strange man who rode on an old motorbike running past me. He looked at me with shifty eyes. I began have a doubt about him as I had heard a news from an email of my class: "Be careful when you go out alone. There are three bad man always intend to touch the girl". Then he rode back. That time he rode slowly on his motorbike. Then, he intended to touch in my chest but his behavior was prevented by me. I hit his hand and shouted" sick in the head". He was scared and rode motorbike away. Finally, I won him by my courage and calm. I think if you met situation like me, you should be calm and brave to solve problems.