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Hi you!!

My English isn't better than anyone but I hope to post comments help us to advance

there is a few error I think you need correct

My family there are six people consist of parents, two my sister, my brother anh me

->There are six people in my family, they're my parents, two my sister, my brother and me

My hobies are excercise, go a walk, go swim, listen to music and read book in free time

->My hobbies are doing exercise, going to walk, go swimming, listening to music and reading book in my free time

Hello Cong Sanh,

I think that studying English is good for everybody and it's really necessary skills for the workplace. The same to other people, who's start studying English is that we are often have mistakes to using English words. The most common is that The translating is from Vietnamese to English. When we have a problem about the translating, we often use the Google translate website to support. This thing is good, but it's Vietnam software and the translate results  often showed the incorrect results. I have read your dialogue and it had the mistakes the similar is that the sentences were so long, it did not have commas and dots between the sentences and phrases. Example the sentense "...let I go to school", you should edit again: "...take me to school"; or My skill English not good... should edit is that "My E skills is not good..."

Best wishes for you,

Canada822

Hello everyone, today I would like introduce mysefl.
My full name's Nguyen Cong Sanh, I was born in Quang Ngai Province. I'm a girl but my name like boy's name. I'm learning at Da Nang Architect University. My family has six people, consisting of parents, two my sister, my brother anh I. My hobies are doing excercise, going for a walk, swimming, listening to music and reading book in free time. I love my family so much, sometimes I want to give up everything but they make me fun and whenever I make mistakes they always stand by me and help me overcome all difficulties, especially my sister. My father is an energetic dad. He works hard so that I go to school. My English skills are not good and I'm trying  to get better evryday. Tonight I feel sad because I'm alone. Have a  good night for you! I hope after you look at this my writing, you will help me! Thank you!

ban oi cho " two my sister" can chuyen lai thanh "two my sisters" phai khong?

nhieu cho ban viet sai loi chinh ta wa

Hi Cong Sanh. There are some mistakes in your text and i would like to help you to correct it. Hope that we will learn English better together!

Hello everyone, today I would like to introduce mysefl.
My full name's Nguyen Cong Sanh, I was born in Quang Ngai Province. I'm a girl but my name sound like a boy's name, I'm learning at Da Nang Architect University. In my family, there are six people: my parents, my two sisters, my brother anh me. My hobbies are doing excercise, go walking, go swimming, listen to music and read book in free time. I love my family so much, sometimes I want to give up everything but they make me fun and whenever I make mistakes, they always beside me and help me to overcome all difficulties, especially my sisters. My father is an energetic dad, he works hard so that I can go to school. My English skills are not good and I'm trying evryday to get better. Tonight I feel sad because I'm alone. Have a  good night everyone! I hope that after reading my paragraph, you will hepl me to correct it! Thank you

I am a girl but my name sounds a boy's name

My family has six people, consisting of my parents, two sisters, a brother and I.

_ Myself not mysefl

_ thường thì two sisters sẽ hay hơn là two my sister và sister phải có s

_ My Hobbies not hobies

_ and not anh

_exercise not excercise

_ My skill English not good and I'm trying evryday to get better -> everyday

_  A energetic -> an

thank you so much!