nocanfool aint nocando

nocanfool - 22/04/2014 06:36

nocanfool ain't nocando

So I tried to do some versification for fun

Here's my verses. I call this "verses" because I'm not a poet. I am actually a poetaster. A poetaster loves fun and foolishness. Note in my " verses" that they carry the feeling of Victorian romanticism in several early verses, then the rest is but the contrapuntal lines in ribald limerick with a twist of fucking Japanese Haiku finale. Here below are the verses:

Kick me the bucket,
Oh my savior.
Come with thy scythe,
Cut me all root
o' suffer'n pain.
If you ain't do,
motherfuck it!

Your comments are appreciated!

njun hung - 22/04/2014 13:37

Wow! What a virtuoso you are! You deserve a place in an Institute of Dementia in London!

nocanfool - 25/04/2014 09:49

Why should thou raveall this about?
Thy years're numbered,
thy feet thither
one'v'm's 'ready in grave.
Ev'rythin' s gone
save thy image
doddering doting
'v a haggard!
'ways 'tis assumed
"the older th' wiser"
methinks untruth
oft other way 'round
"the older the depraved"
for well-fit elders.
Thus the pedophiles
'n the rapists
ain't rare
'mong the old!

njun hung - 25/04/2014 10:23

Wow yes! Bravo. You do a good job. I love it and take no offence. " On the Hwang river, the hind surge overwhelms the front."

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