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I have the same idea with you :). However, i've found some small errors in your writing. You should write "each person" instead of "each people", "successful people" instead of "success people" and "sometimes" instead of "sometime". I wish you will succeed!

you are all so good, but I'd like to suggest that, Nguyenvandai you should use another way ore other ways, not other way. And Tran Thi Thu Phuong, you should use some mistakes instaed of small errors

anyway I learnt from you so much. Thanks

ore = or, sorry, I type with a mistake

I do not know exactly, but when you write a essay, you do not use "...", be careful about "capital letter".

In my view, all of you have some mistake such as: "other way"," a success and good people", " is over", "you success or fail" and so on. You make the ideal which is too general.

i think using "..." in an essay is ok but don't abuse it. It seems like you did abuse it ^^.

As hoang cuong said, be careful with "capital letter". My teacher once said that he would be very angry if he had to read an essay with a lot of words written in capital letter.

if you want to emphasize something, try using quotation marks ^^.