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you can do it!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks.hope you too ^^

this is my opinion, a 10th grade student, so i can find some mistakes.

This is the frist(first) time I write an artical(article) by English and post it here.I have graduated  from a university for 3 years.My major in a university is Chiness(chinese) language. So it means about 7 years ago I had not  used Engish as a communicative tool.After leaving school and getting a job, i have realize(realised) how important of English(the importance of English / important English ) is. Nowdays,the society is more and more developing more and more.It attracts a lot of foreign companies to invest in our country.So that's why you have to be good at English if you wanna getting (get)a good job with high salary.I just have started studing(studying) English 3 months ago.It's so difficult for me in the frist time.But i believe everything will be fine in the future.I know I still have to try more to improve my English skills. "You will win,if you want " ......

good job! keep practicing,guy!^^

this is my opinion, a 10th grade student, so i can find some mistakes.

This is the frist(first) time I write an artical(article) by English and post it here.I have graduated  from a university for 3 years.My major in a university is Chiness(chinese) language. So it means about 7 years ago I had not  used Engish as a communicative tool.After leaving school and getting a job, i have realize(realised) how important of English(the importance of English / important English ) is. Nowdays,the society is more and more developing more and more.It attracts a lot of foreign companies to invest in our country.So that's why you have to be good at English if you wannagetting (get)a good job with high salary.I just have started studing(studying) English 3 months ago.It's so difficult for me in the frist time.But i believe everything will be fine in the future.I know I still have to try more to improve my English skills. "You will win,if you want " ......

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ok,thanks bạn nhiều ^^

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This is the frist(first) time I write an artical(article) (in) by English and post it here.I have graduated  from a university for 3 years ago (sự việc tốt nghiệp đã xong rùi nên dùng ở past simple, đồng thời đổi luôn giới từ).My major in a university is Chiness(Chinese) language. So it means about 7 years ago I had not  (did not) used Engish as a communicative tool.After leaving school and getting a job, i have realize(realised) how important of English(the importance of English / important English ) is. Now(a)days,the society is more and more developing more and more.It attracts a lot of foreign companies to invest in our country.So that's why you have to be good at English if you wannagetting (get)a good job with high salary.I have (just) started studing(studying) English 3 months ago.It's so difficult for me in (at) the first time.But i believe everything will be fine in the future.I know I still have to try more to improve my English skills. "You will win,if you want " ......

i can't believe that you've just learned English for 3 months. You did a good job!

thanks mấy bạn đã sửa văn phạm cũng như lỗi chính tả giúp mình.Chúc mấy bạn cuối tuần vui vẻ ^^