letieuphuong
study in small college
There are some good things when students study in small college. Firstly, it is convenient to go home. when students are free time or run out money, they can go home quickly to take money. Inadition, when students might feel homesick and tired as well as stress after a hard week, they can go home to encourage spirit from their family. Secondly, cost is suitable for economic condition family. To poor families, these students dont have enough money participate in large college, so they ought to choose small college to continue their study instead of stopping for high school fee. Finally, quality of classes is good. There are fewer student than large college. Therefor, proffeser can exchange or keep up with their students easily. Moreover, equipment of classes is good enough to do some activities in teaching and studing process. For these reasons , studying small college have some advantages for students.
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Phổ thôngHi letieuphuong,
It's my pleasure to correct mistakes from your writing:d
1. I must hand in my lesson (or hand my lession in) to my teacher in* February.
2. when students have free time.
3. run out of money
4. as well as stressed (stressed is adj, stress is noun)
5. after a hard-studying week
6. they can go home to be* encouraged in spirit by their family
7. cost is suitable for families in low financial condition.
8. These student don't have enough money to participate in ...
9. in stead of stopping for the reason of high school-fee
10. Finally, the qualily of learning is good in a small college because of fewer students.
11. Therefore, professor can easily communicate lessons to their students and take in all students' studying situation.
Your writing is quite good. But it's still like you translate words by words from Vietnamese into English. To be good in writing, you should do more reading besides learning writing tips from writing skill books. Because when you read English books, you will see how they write. that's not what exactly translated into Vietnamese words. Hope you try more. So do I.:D
good day.